May 13, 2022
To:Momentie
Thanks for the thoughts. 😀
I think this beginning reflects a lot of how I felt writing it - a lack of confidence in what the MC (and me) can do. When you start off with expectations of greatness, everything you are able to do just feels mediocre. And you end up falling in a lull of just acting "average".
So it's just him feeling out the world for now. Which in my view, felt a bit slow and slice of lifey.
And who wouldn't find humor in being bonked by a giant radish? 😂