Aug 23, 2023
Congrats on finishing, Shu! Glad I followed it all the way through (had to as a fellow deez balls enthusiast, lmao).
I will say that this story took quite the unexpected turn near the end, something that I hadn't expected at all. Totally had it in my mind that it would be a touching soccer story without 'too much' of the deity interference, lol. I do like how it turned out, as it gave their chance meeting a bit of oomph in the reasons department.
I like how you show them together in the time skip, but... where's my man busting his powers at the Nationals? 😭 Hoping for that Inari wind vs. the no-no-no, not in my house matchup. 😎
Joke's aside. had a great time reading this. Good luck to ya!
