Aug 18, 2023
Congrats on finishing, Pernodi. I'm happy that you finished the story off with a Twinkle Buster Beam (even if the only destruction was some random plane of existence outside of reality). It was a fun journey that finally explains a little bit of what is going on.
I do feel like the ending is a bit abrupt though. Kind of like you rushed to nope the boss away. Since you have the time, an epilogue chapter with them continuing their journey (as a prelude to volume 2) may be worth adding. Personally, I think a cute moment of them walking towards the next town would be a nice finisher. Maybe they should trade hats for a scene. 🤠
Best of luck to you!
