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Jan 07, 2025

To:Sammi9519

Thank you. It was a very logical decision.
I wasn't able to read other books much while writing my own. That's why I can now read freely after finishing my book. The character dynamics in Thorns in Paradise seem interesting. I will definitely continue. 😊

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:10

Jan 07, 2025

To:Minny

I’m glad it made such an impact!

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:3

Jan 07, 2025

To:Minny

Thank you! I'm so glad the emotions and atmosphere resonated with you.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:1

Jan 07, 2025

To:Minny

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! I'm really glad you're enjoying the duality of Cotox and the historical elements – those were so important in shaping the world. Ren’s moral struggle and the Anchio concept are definitely central to the story, and I’m excited for you to see how they evolve as things progress. I appreciate your support and can’t wait to share what’s next!

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:0

Jan 07, 2025

I liked how you revealed more about Alex’s past and how it connects to his reactions.

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:11

Jan 07, 2025

Nice chapter! Lizzy's confidence and Alex's concern for her create a great dynamic. The mix of humor and tension keeps things interesting. Looking forward to more!

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:10

Jan 06, 2025

Author's Comment:
Mirea's name was created by combining the nicknames of my first reader, SamMI, and my constant supporter, CrREAm Cookie. Starting with these two, I want to thank everyone who read and supported me.
It was an intense, exhausting, but incredibly enjoyable journey for me. Writing a novel for a competition like this made me feel like a character from Bakuman! :D I hope it has been an enjoyable journey for you as well.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:22

Jan 05, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Unfortunately, I don't know the game

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:10

Jan 05, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

i hope so

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:9

Jan 03, 2025

To:kazesenken

Even in a situation like that, there might be a side to him thinking this way, but that thought didn’t last very long. 😂

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:10

Jan 03, 2025

To:kazesenken

I haven’t played Metal Gear Solid, but I’m glad the scene reminded you of such a classic! Maybe I should give it a try someday. I hope Ren’s fate meets your expectations. 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:9

Jan 03, 2025

To:Bakajanai69

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! The sudden transition was intentional to heighten the emotional impact, but I’ll consider your suggestion to refine it further. I’m thrilled you’re enjoying Kaede and Ren’s dynamic—it only gets more intriguing from here! 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:1

Jan 02, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Without the suffering, it probably wouldn't be a dystopia. Still, Ren is likely the person who suffers the most in this story. I guess he's a bit unlucky.
Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy the other chapters as well. 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:8

Jan 02, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

That makes a lot of sense. You're definitely right. Still, I'm honestly glad that Ren didn't die.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:7

Jan 02, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I wouldn't entrust my sin to Cotox. Anything can happen to someone from another country. Since Ren is the main character, I generally want to narrate every moment of his in the novel as well.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:6

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