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aaa

Jul 28, 2025

Gambling is actually based and I’m tired of pretending it’s not

Gamble-Mania

Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2025

To:lolitroy

lol ... yeah.....
But thanks for making it to the end! I am grateful and appreciate it.

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:36

Jun 13, 2025

When you say first half, do you mean A) "The Apotheosis of MN Part 1/2", or B) the first half of the overall story?
Because I never intended A) to be comedic, other than maybe some very dark and gallows humor at times with some of the insane stuff the Four 'Heroes'/Sadists say.
But if you mean B), then yes the comedy of the SoL sections is intentional. As for why.. my intention was to have a carefree 'summer' section for C to look back on in the later sections, and for the reader to be alongside them for that part. (although I realize from your earlier commment that part might not have come across as intended ..)

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:29

Jun 13, 2025

To:lolitroy

1. there are passing mentions of humans and elves having always been at war in the early chapter like ch 2 when C and H are talking.. my idea was that the two groups are pretty much liable to fall into war at any given point in time, depending on the whims of their respective unseen leaders..
2. this might be my bad in not making it clear, but Aerya's pretty much just the deity for Lazumere and the surroudning areas. All regions/villages in the elfen lands would have their own respective deities, and assumedly their own avatars that embody them.
3. the unseen humans and elves puppeting the current leaders in the background have decided its time for another war
4. lol

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:28

Jun 07, 2025

To:lolitroy

His parents were west-aboos

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:9

Jun 07, 2025

To:lolitroy

Thanks for the thoughts! I really appreciate them. Yeah I've had a good month to step back away from the story and I've got a lot of personal feelings about what I think worked and didn't... I definitely do fall back on the whole 'archetypes' thing as a crutch.
Ironically I think I put in the SoL-heavy material around this point because I was getting nervous people would tune out by this point if something 'exciting' didn't happen, hence the gun fights. So it's interesting to hear you liked the first few chapters. Was afraid it would filter most people so I felt like I had to get the characters doing something 'fun'. (and obviously.. at the cost of real emotional development..)
Thanks for reading again!!

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:10

Jun 06, 2025

To:lolitroy

lol.. yeah

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:7

Jun 06, 2025

To:lolitroy

kinda like how 'U-Turn' any comment section on this site into a lively party

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:3

May 15, 2025

Man, I can't believe Lucille and Jackie would put so much effort into making an elaborate Arrested Development reference.
(jk, this was actually a sweet chapter.)

Just East of Eden

Chapter:22

May 12, 2025

Natsuki… Web novel club… okaeri… 😭

Just East of Eden

Chapter:20

May 11, 2025

To:lolitroy

Don’t worry, no cat scratches in this one

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:1

May 10, 2025

If I had a quarter for every time I came across the knee gag in your works, I'd have two quarters.
... which isn't a lot, but it's at least enough to buy Lucille two lemonades. (or 10 psychiatric help sessions from the chapter's titular character)

Just East of Eden

Chapter:8

May 04, 2025

The cover changed again!!!

Sucky Apocalypse

Chapter:7

Apr 29, 2025

To:Kenma Ryuji

I actually havent read Magi but sound like i'll have to check it out .... Thanks for reading!

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:16

Apr 27, 2025

To:Hallowfear

Nah it’ll be fiiiine

A Crystalline Summer

Chapter:1

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