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Jan 11, 2025

To:lolitroy

Thank you 😭😭

Now go write and finish please! You can do it!!

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:50

Jan 11, 2025

To:lolitroy

H-happy birthday!!

(Actual big thanks for reading this thing the whole way through though)

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:50

Jan 11, 2025

“At least be over 6’”

…. Bruh I felt that one

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:17

Jan 11, 2025

These last 3 or 4 chapters (or however many ones you posted after that small hiatus) have been really well written and flow very nicely.

Naming the shop after Robert 😭

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:37

Jan 09, 2025

You know, if Stella vaporizes Asaba now, nobody else needs to know how PON she really is. 😼

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:36

Jan 09, 2025

S-stealth camo?!?! Masaka……..

(Also you absolute mad lad. 4 days before end of contest.)

Xyrite

Chapter:1

Jan 07, 2025

“until Isla fell asleep and Stella dreamed about dreaming”
Why does this line go so hard

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:32

Jan 07, 2025

To:lolitroy

Some birds just can’t be caged—they gotta be out doing Madoka fights, and running from giant monsters

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:44

Jan 06, 2025

To:Pope Evaristus

Next stop: omedetou ending

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:44

Jan 06, 2025

To:lolitroy

Hmm that's an interesting way of looking at it. (In my opinion, they probably wouldn't have entered "here" if "that" had happened.. Because their only connection to this place is because of A in the first place.)

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:44

Jan 05, 2025

The gray-bearded man's opinion, on Alt-Intelligence: "I strongly feel that this is an insult to life itself."

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:21

Jan 05, 2025

Make pie, not war.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:30

Jan 05, 2025

To:lolitroy

(Happy, cheery, tonally-inconsistent ED plays during credits)

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:42

Jan 04, 2025

To:kazesenken

I actually realized that last bit is the worst advice I could have given considering the very next chapter hinges on reading each header section to understand what's going on.
... Um. Just forget everything I said just now 😩

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:9

Jan 04, 2025

To:kazesenken

Thanks for reading and commenting Kaze!
They're not actually from outlining--the sections USUALLY separate whole scenes, or smaller 'beats'--but in a few exceptions, such as major info dumps like this chapter, I separate where I feel like there should be small breathers or checkpoints, to stop and ... ehh, 'absorb' the info for lack of a better term.
(For context, the 'Prof explains a logic gate' mini-sections were originally a lot longer and I had wanted to separate that entire giant section into 3 parts, but I ended up compressing parts 2 and 3 into basically one line--and then, I just left the section headings where they were.)
You do raise a great point, however, and even I feel like I went overboard a bit here. I'd actually recommend skipping over the section headings the first time through a chapter--and then going back (only if you feel like it, of course), to read the section headings that sum up each mini-section.

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:9

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