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May 03, 2026
“The soft soles of my shoes are almost soundless against the stone tiles as I move through the dark rooms, past shelves and desks, on my way to the staff room.”
A delightfully written sentence! I’m really enjoying your writing style. very pensive and solemnly quiet so far.
May 02, 2026
But yep! Should’ve taken off those watches!
“First time having your soul ripped apart by powerful people trying to become immortal?” - Yuki
why did this suddenly switch to script format for dialogue? “name: dialogue” feels weird to suddenly drop in as a formatting idea…
Should have taken those watches off!
ohhhhhh very cool! I had some suspicions about Yuna and Xiaolin being connected. nice!
Also, why is Farah showing them? Is she playing at something or a part of it somehow?…
Wow I honestly was not expecting this direction! I thought paranormal like UFO aliens scenario this the stargazing moment. Very intrigued! Good creepy vibes in the tunnel moments.
May 01, 2026
ohhhhhhh Lizzie.
To:Mara
I thought a few of you would appreciate that! future mecha aspects won’t use that technology but it was important to unveil the soul stone concept. that’s going to come back later in a few beautiful ways
Apr 30, 2026
To:Mario Nakano 64
thank you! I’m very appreciative of the read. I really enjoyed writing this. I hadn’t written any form of novel in years when I did this, so it was fun to get back into it. I view this very much like a proof of concept for me of finding my voice and themes again. I’m happy with how it turned out and am very grateful for you checking it out!
don’t answer it! let them bathe!
ahhhhhh gotcha. I can see how that might be misconstrued.
beware the trope!!
yep! I thought it would be an appropriate character trait for Shreve to not really talk about himself like that though.