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Nov 10, 2025
To:Moon
I did love the idea that in a world where so much knowledge and history has been erased, Izhari was clinging to all this thinking every page was crucial, when in reality some of it was simply smut.
a woman of the people.
To:Mara
our poor, rage-filled father. he was a wonderful character to write.
thank you Mara! I'm grateful for your read and engagement. it means a lot. this is my favorite story I’ve written and Sayane is my favorite character I’ve created. I hope you enjoyed your time with her.
Nov 09, 2025
also, it's a small detail, but I really liked this moment for Azag. I wanted to have several “bookend” moments through the story, where moments at the beginning are matched with follow ups at the end. when we first meet Azag, he makes a comment in rage about how “no one listens” to him as the revolution is slaughtered. now, Sayane comments that everyone is listening to him. there are a few other moments like this that I really liked doing to help give closure and completion to the character journeys for the core cast.
thank you! I think the biggest driver for tension is not in the hope that Sayane succeeds, it's in what the cost is. and in the end, the core of this story has always been Sayane’s journey of self discovery. now, after everything, her last challenge is coming to acceptance with death. she's died already, and if this is her final goodbye, can she find peace in that and greet her end with tranquility? that's what this has all been about. acceptance of mortality and self worth. I'm very grateful for your reading!
aw thank you!
I was waiting for you to reach this chapter. this is my favorite moment in the whole story in many ways. No more crying, this, and one more upcoming part! i thought this was a very good, realistic summary of the grief and acceptance our two leads would be feeling at this moment. especially with the final Shard waiting.
To:Deleted User
well you’ve read Deflowered. it’s uhhh very consentual they just have to get to that point.
Nov 08, 2025
somebody knows something and maybe knows someone…
I really wanted to challenge Sayane’s vocals, creativity, and personal investment in the songs for the Shards. she has to take everything she’s learned and felt, plus more. and every remaining song has to feel unique from what came before.
it sounded awesome. pure awesome. get ready for Sayane the Metal Priestess.
our dear Sayane always manages to find a way!
yep! everyone is feeling the shift!
poor Tomita is a little cleanliness obsessed and a little fastidious, so yep he needs to tidy things up