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Nov 05, 2025
To:Moon
it’s an important moment Tomita is lucky she arrived!
To:Deleted User
in so many ways!
Nov 04, 2025
friend! good to see your alert! and it might not be a great idea but it’s a needed one! plus if you’re in a world where nothing is safe, what’s a little risk. I like how Sayane is never reckless but she’s willing to be bold and take risks. even going back to her running away from home as a kid. if she’s got a goal, she’ll put herself out there to achieve it.
To:Mara
and what comes next is worse
sorry Mara. it was an intense chapter.
Nov 03, 2025
yep both of them are not in good mental or emotional states at the start of the novel. and Izhari’s inner demons will continue to plague her mind in myriad ways for sure.
thank you! complex realism was the goal, even if it’s in a fantasy realm full of mystical beings and magical music.
I realllllly enjoyed Echo’s reveal. there were subtle hints right at the start, like him not being there when the giant stone creature returned to retrieve Sayane. And I really liked portraying his complexity from the get go. he is still learning not to despise the underworld because he was told to. the serum makes him admit he is starting this purely selfishly. I wanted to show that in rebellion and revolution, there will be all kinds of people who have to come together, all with different perspectives and motivations. his journey is tragic and compelling.
exactly! he’s revolutionary adjacent in his own way, but at the start of the story he’s also jaded and neutral. there’s some nice backstory that is steadily fleshed out. he hates how dogmatic and unrelenting the revolution is, but at the start of things he didn’t believe there was any alternative.
interesting perspective! I was writing him as fully supportive of Sayane’s autonomy so it’s very much just her decisions. through the story, you’ll see Azag speak up, but I think he also understands she wants and in some ways needs to throw herself into things fully. the Revolution certainly benefits from anything anti-Silence, but this is definitely not what they currently want. however, revolutions evolve…
Nov 02, 2025
thank you! the musical aspects were a fun challenge to write.
yep a broken world needed a broken soul, so that they could heal together!
thank you Mara! truly one of my favorite things I’ve ever written, and I think the buildup made it actually land how I wanted. Sayane is finally reborn.
yep after years of being a product and being reduced to uncertainty about every aspect of her life, Sayane is now finally growing into being her own person.
get ready. this chapter and the next one, No More crying, and my favorite chapters of the entire first half. thus far it’s been about Sayane having time to heal and rest. her real journey is about to begin!