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Zauru

Aspiring writer also with dreams of one day designing my own TCG. Haven't uploaded since the 2023 contest, but hope some of my future stories can find a home here!

Going to uploading more over the next few months. Hope I don't disappoint. ^^

registered at: Nov 20, 2019

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Jul 04, 2023

Shinji sounded like he literally wanted to start a fight with Akari. 😂 Although considering the premise, that's probably very possible. Well at least Nanami is nice.

This was a nice breezy chapter.

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:2

Jul 04, 2023

I don't really have an issue with ambiguous rules in magic as far as Isekai (Or fantasy in general) goes. As long as there's a level of consistency I'm usually alright.

Can't wait for the hidden jokes in the future! 😆

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:8

Jul 04, 2023

Yes, we finally reached the first date! Although pissing off a family relative on the first date seems a bit counterintuitive. Ace should at least wait a few dates before doing that.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:7

Jul 04, 2023

Oh wow, well I guess that's an extra wrinkle that Jun will have to work out at some point. I don't think it's impossible though!

After seeing Claire mess with the clock, I begin to wonder the full extent of her magical abilities. She's already mentioned that magic can't force people to fall in love, but what else can't she do, I wonder.

I love the reference back to the kelpie incident! 😂 Little boomerang jokes like that in a story always make my day.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:8

Jul 04, 2023

Really enjoyed this one. I imagine it's a bit difficult to write a sympathetic protagonist in a story about finding your oshi's identity, but you managed to humanize Kaiden pretty well here so far.

Val pretty much forcing Kaiden into the plot is pretty funny. I have a feeling I'm going to like the characters in this story.😂

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:1

Jul 03, 2023

To:Feyblue

Eh, you got me there I guess. 😂

But yeah, I'm probably going to start binging these to catch up.

Dragon X Digital Dream

Chapter:2

Jul 03, 2023

Kei finishes with an interesting question. 🤔

Not much else to say at the moment as I know the first couple of chapters are being used to establish the world. I look forward to reading the rest.

Dragon X Digital Dream

Chapter:2

Jul 02, 2023

To:kazesenken

Oh, she definitely is. 😂 There's so much I want to try, but the word count I want for the story sorta limits me to how much I can put in. I don't think I'd do myself any favors if I wrote a 70k plus story.

The One-Date Romantic's Dilemma

Chapter:3

Jul 02, 2023

Eh, Haru's right. He doesn't need any more meta-commentary in his dreams. I think that would be the biggest ego bruiser, considering the content his brain has access to.😂

Looking forward to the dating sim arc! Good chapter as always!

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:3

Jul 02, 2023

As a reader with little knowledge of MMOs and RPGs, this was pretty funny. I also like to see the various viewpoints and morality when it comes to content creation. Jason wants to create art, but he's also practical enough to realize he needs money. I like how this entry's going so far!

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

Jul 01, 2023

To:minatika

The human experience can be surprisingly generous with what is offered to us. I'd say a higher awareness of self and human emotions from a negative situation isn't a bad thing. I definitely appreciate one of the stories that came as a result of that emotional awareness!

Thanks for reading as always!

The One-Date Romantic's Dilemma

Chapter:6

Jul 01, 2023

To:minatika

RIP to Kenta's wallet. lol For just one chapter(maybe 2 at this point, the arc's gotten longer) I'll be a theme park visioneer. When I think about it, there's a lot of possibilities with a theme park's setting. 😆

The break-up will form a significant part of Kenta's character arc and it'll certainly be relevant later. (maybe in a future arc?🤔)
(I also apologize for your family situation. Parents can be a wild card in terms of quality. Some are better than others. Mine are--okay lol)

Kenta definitely has some strong opinions about relationships and love that he'll have to work out before the date. Likewise for Fumiko. They'll have a higher than average awareness for each other's actions during the date. Should be interesting!

The One-Date Romantic's Dilemma

Chapter:6

Jun 30, 2023

To:kazesenken

On a surface level, they're not super alike, but similar to the boys that come before him, Kenta will be able to provide something universal to her writing that anyone can provide. Next chapter will shine a bit more light on their specific relationship as far as her writing is concerned.

The One-Date Romantic's Dilemma

Chapter:2

Jun 30, 2023

Jun is slowly coming into his own romantically, but he's definitely not a finished product yet for Claire I'm assuming. 😁

So I ended up being half-right I guess. I figured a girl in the countryside like Mia would probably have a lot on her plate, but it's interesting that her fear of crowded places is also indicated as a fear of Amamiya's as well.

The comment about his dad teaching him to 'win a girl over' is interesting. Is this an easily broken habit, and will it become relevant later?

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:7

Jun 29, 2023

The pessimistic Haru is finally coming around! 😆 It's kind of funny how much he tries to minimize Grace's existence, despite the fact that he's potentially arguing to a smaller piece of himself. Although I don't have enough info to go off of yet, it seems like he's become more accepting of the 'dream-like aspects' of himself. The story's gradually getting more interesting.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

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