May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

thank you so much for the compliments on my writing. it's the payoff from 35 chapters of build up, to me, which means it had to be that much more impactful. what happened WAS real. elisabeth knows that much.

but remember, the darkest hour comes before the light

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

i wanted it to be GUT WRENCHING, for you to think "yes, finally!" only for it all to get ripped away from her right before her eyes, outside of her control. i wanted it to HURT. you get some payoff here, but just a taste -- its tantalizingly close, yet so far. that's the idea, anyway, lol. i hope i executed on that well

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

the consequences of the insane pressure from the deighsels being lifted! part of his true nature is allowed to shine through

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May 06, 2025

To:Lucro

LOL we LOVE madadh in this house!! bestest doggy!!

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May 06, 2025

Of course, you can't have one twin without the other!

its also a good sign to me that i signposted everything well, that readers are able to vaguely predict in some ways what might happen. then, when you see it happen, you feel smart and rewarded for reading. its amazing that it's been going so well!

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

setting the stage with more than just visuals is important! i hope ive done a good job of making those elements stand out, too

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

hey, its making you feel something though, right?

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

the venn diagram of margot haters and marie stans is a circle LMAO

what could possibly be margot's deal....

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

baaaaaaaaa

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

i hoped that it would really help characterize elisabeth in the right direction, in more ways than one. if im making you tear up i think i did the right thing

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

finley supports her!!! he thinks shes great!!
also what references could you possible mean :) :)

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

they need one another!

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

he IS a giant dork, isnt he??

i definitely would love to write more alone time for the two of them. it seems to be super popular lol

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

the best thing you can say about my characters is that they're realistic and relatable!! thank you!!

she just like me fr

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May 06, 2025

To:lordcrow__

its also extremely fun to write, to totally change up the style from narrative to like, historical academic writing (more my specialty) lol

i was worried it would feel like too much of an exposition dump, but it seems like thats not the case?

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