May 14, 2025

To:Rosee_t

i have two siblings myself in real life, so i felt pretty okay writing them being snarky to one another lol, it isn't always as rosy and silly as writing makes it seem, but i hope i communicated that there's conflict in sibling relationships plenty, as well
that bit about people not explaining things to elisabeth, im curious what you think as to the reasons for that might be
marie is very much a foil in many ways, but the two maids both do care about elisabeth's safety, at least :D
keep reading to find out~

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May 13, 2025

To:Rosee_t

You really see all the effort I put into writing and appreciate it!! you're amazing!
which one between finley and diana do you like more? >:3c

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May 13, 2025

To:Rosee_t

YOU TAKE NOTES AS YOU READ!?!?!?!?!?!?! ON *MY* BOOK? WHAT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I AM SO HONORED LEGITIMATELY 😭😭😭😭

writing on a physical book would be.... so.... coool.... i am seriously moved beyond words that you keep a little notebook on my novel its incredible

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May 13, 2025

To:Rosee_t

if i can make someone who doesn't normally like that kind of thing enjoy reading it, then i can die happy LMAO <3

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May 13, 2025

To:Rosee_t

well, just mindlessly consuming, i guess LOL
but you clearly arent doing that!

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May 13, 2025

To:Rosee_t

you think my writing is good literature!?!? 😭 i seriously love how thorough they are, this world is something i put a lot into, so to see someone really dig deep into it means SO much

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May 13, 2025

To:Rosee_t

your thoughts are so kind, though, so i WILL be thanking you

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

the gender roles being played with is another super important aspect of the story, one that you very excellently read from the subtext!! thank you for always commenting on what you notice, the little details, the culture beneath the surface, everything!!! it fills me with happiness!

poor elisabeth can't say "dude"

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

you caught me, you're picking up on a TON lol
you shall soon see the direction it will go, but you have good hunches. i'd love to see more of your predictions and analysis as you read!!!

i really also love how you are digging into EVERYTHING!! and like analyzing every character and how they act. it really genuinely makes me overjoyed that you not only care about the story enough to do that, but that you feel my writing is substantial and thoughtful enough to deserve it. thank you 💜

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

OH NO YOU SPEAK FRENCH LOL, yeah it's meant to be like a little regional thing that only lumineuse calls it! i hope that came across.
also thank you for complimenting my descriptive skill!!! i really wanted to be clear about how the scene played out, but without being TOO deep in the weeds or anything, you know?
finley and diana are also fan favorites ehehe. their intro was one of my favorite things to write

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

i would SO love to get a talented monster artist to make a visual rendition of the scourge, it was hard to describe them without being too graphic, while still instilling a sense of horror in the reader. honestly, i would die of happiness if my book ever got to go to print. I would love a physical copy just to have for myself lol. i won't spoil anything, but im glad youre picking up on stuff so eagerly!!

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

i love how much people love Marie, she really is just a wonderful presence whenever "on-screen," right? elisabeth acclimating to her womanhood is a very critical theme for me for this story, so im very happy to see you pick up on that subtlety. it becomes clearer as things go on, but.... yeah, she do be looking at herself in the mirror a little bit, huh?

it did pain me to write her own mother that way, but have no fear!! things wont be as bad soon!

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

fantasy politics and fantasy-royal type stuff is an interest of mine, and I wanted to make a conflict in the setting that wasn't impossible to believe or too hard to grasp. its excellent to hear that at least its not overwhelming or shoved into your face. I hope in spite of the themes of governance and stuff like that you continue to enjoy it, but trust me when I say it is far more a romance than political drama LOL

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

I MADE YOU LAUGH OUT LOUD LETSGOOOOOO
i sincerely appreciate your genuine analysis of the scenes and characters, it is baffling to me that someone is not only consuming, not only reading, but like critically thinking about and analyzing my writing..... mind-blowing. i hope you enjoy the novel as you continue!! <3

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May 12, 2025

To:Rosee_t

the way you point out specific things about each chapter and leave long comments detailing your thoughts makes me genuinely so incredibly happy, i cannot explain. thank you!!! friedbert deighsel is truly awful.

you leave such wonderful compliments on my writing, it is touching

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