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Himicchi

Hello! I'm Himitsu... a Himitsu? Just call me Himicchi! I've written a few fantasy stories. Currently I'm working on "The Second World" for the isekai contest.

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Mar 25, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

It’s not necessarily haha funny, so it’s not like you need to be laughing out loud at it. It is ultimately more of a psychological horror than a dark comedy, too. Even though the first few chapters felt more comedic.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:11

Mar 24, 2025

To:Lihinel

It says the beginning of this chapter in like the first para- kind of in passing!

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:2

Mar 23, 2025

To:_Caity_

Thank you for the feedback! I definitely can focus too much on character interactions, since generally my style is very character-focused. I really enjoy working on characterization, but you're probably right that it goes on a little long in this chapter.

The Soul of Ledoric's

Chapter:2

Mar 21, 2025

To:lolitroy

Unplayable tbh. Need to patch in proper digestive systems in the 1.02 update.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:1

Mar 21, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

That’s true. I felt like the setting was peculiar enough that some quick exposition was necessary. Maybe it could be a little less obviated.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:1

Mar 15, 2025

I absolutely love the worldbuilding. The detail about unmarked graves as an element of culture is fascinating. The disdain for what humans have done is a thread I'm interested to follow up on. The praying skeletons remind me of "Made in Abyss" a little, and that's always a good thing to be reminded of.

The death of magic causing magical creatures to lash out is interesting. It makes me wonder if they're cornered; they know they're dying so they're panicking. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Letters to the Wandering Moon

Chapter:1

Mar 15, 2025

Getting to know Camille's backstory is very beautiful. The way you handled the mother's passing was heartfelt but painful. Her last words being her pride in her daughter hit me like a truck. Luca being the missing piece makes me even more worried about something happening to him!

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:7

Mar 14, 2025

Ah, understanding his backstory make it easier to follow him. He's doing it for love, and it's a bit twisted, but his grief really shows. I wonder if Luca and Camille's budding love will parallel Magnus and Eleanor in the future.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:6

Mar 13, 2025

This is an interesting setup. The knight is a bit of an edgelord, so it's satisfying to see him get punished (corrected 💢👹). The elf is there to help, and I can't wait to see what her personality will be going forward. Mentor sort of?

But most importantly:

Naughty Edgelord Knight, get corrected! 💢💢💢

Enrai no Kōshi - 遠雷の孔子

Chapter:1

Mar 13, 2025

I really enjoy your dialogue.

Fortune's Gallery

Chapter:0

Mar 13, 2025

I did really enjoy the prologue, but this chapter is way more entrancing. I love the characterization of Eirin, but also of Risei. I love that the princess is this complete gremlin and her companion is just filled with secondhand embarrassment. I see way more of this story now, and I'm super excited to continue it!

SING!! The Mermaid Needs the Shiny Necklace ✧˖°.

Chapter:1

Mar 13, 2025

Ah. This is a fun turn. I like the eugenics aspect of it, it's horrifyingly utilitarian. He genuinely (wrongly) believes this will help humanity. I'm interested to see what Lyra did to betray him. As always, can't wait to read more.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:5

Mar 12, 2025

Dang, she should have just healed all of her injuries from the beatings, that's what a Healer would do /s

It's a funny start. I can't tell from just the prologue what direction it will take, but it doesn't seem generic for a fantasy setting. I'm interested in what her character arc will be. I thought it would be a comedy from the title, but I'm getting the sense it's dramatic from the start. Maybe something between, I'll have to keep going. It's fun.

Fuck you! I Don't Want to be a Healer!

Chapter:1

Mar 12, 2025

The setup with the princess leaving is a bit exciting. We get the prelude of the fisher, too. It seems like a subversion of the basic Little Mermaid plot where Princess Kei is caught up in solving the issues of other people rather than being stuck as a true "fish out of water". It's an interesting start!

SING!! The Mermaid Needs the Shiny Necklace ✧˖°.

Chapter:0

Mar 12, 2025

Ah, and Magnus is her dad (actually I think it was mentioned in an earlier chapter and I was thinking too deep and overlooked)! That happened so fast. Last chapter he was watching Luca, so he's also protecting Luca here. Camille's status here is interesting, but it's also interesting how she doesn't immediately pull rank, and allows her father to do so for her. I can't wait to see her become more assertive (if she does)

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:4

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