Mar 10, 2025
The pacing in this first chapter is very interesting. I'm excited to see more. The names Joker and Jester, both from cards, caught my eye. It was funny how he deduced that his own thought process would have been to just shorten the name Jester to Jess. Both have fun characterization, and I'm excited to see, going forward, the idea behind Joker's possible insomnia. Jester's borderline (actual) insanity caught me off guard a little bit, but I'm still excited to see what developments it leads to.