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Himicchi

Hello! I'm Himitsu... a Himitsu? Just call me Himicchi! I've written a few fantasy stories. Currently I'm working on "The Second World" for the isekai contest.

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Apr 11, 2025

Mitsuki my beloved!

Asami is actually very fast, which adds up. For all her difficulties with confidence, I like seeing her doing well!

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:11

Apr 11, 2025

To:Steward McOy

I probably should show her actually thinking the, “I don’t want people to think less of me…” the point is she’s embarrassed, but actually having her express that would be stronger. Thanks.

Capmon: Cyan Seas Version

Chapter:15

Apr 10, 2025

This has been the strongest chapter of the story so far! The character work is very nice.

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:9

Apr 10, 2025

I’ve always had a soft spot for chapters about characters’ eating together, their food preferences, etc. I find that it gives a lot of really nice, subtle characterization without being over-explainey, and also is just relatable since sharing food with other people is always awesome. Asami is just adorable in this chapter, and though it’s just a preference, I was finding myself saying “She’s so me” about her dislike of things that are super sweet. (Though I stil have my sweet things I can like.)

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:8

Apr 10, 2025

This is a sweet introduction to this arc The arc being titled Catnip is rather interesting all things considered, since it leads me to believe the arc itself will be about the ways that catfolk interact with the human world. Similarly we can see how Asami soothes herself by taking on an otherwise human appearance- possibly a nod to the fact that catnip is a soothing agent. Sayuri’s comments and internal monologue within this introduction are sugary sweet, and are fun to read!

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:7

Apr 09, 2025

I like the protagonist. The prose is nice. Good anime.

The waste where silver gods lie

Chapter:1

Apr 05, 2025

To:Steward McOy

I AM --STEVE-- SQUIRM

Capmon: Cyan Seas Version

Chapter:7

Apr 01, 2025

She is a bean. I could imagine her running around Bryant Park late at night looking for ghosts!

Whispering Ghoststories

Chapter:2

Apr 01, 2025

Subbed ‘Ghost Story’ vibes or Dubbed ‘Ghost Story’ vibes?

Really, fun start. The characters have unique personalities, but I’m still learning to tell them apart. Interested to see where this goes.

Whispering Ghoststories

Chapter:1

Mar 31, 2025

To:Lihinel

Yet.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:5

Mar 29, 2025

To:obliviousbushtit

Thank you!

Capmon: Cyan Seas Version

Chapter:1

Mar 28, 2025

To:Stoneflew

I felt like Bubbles needed a happy ending, since she actually has a similar character arc to Fawn's. I wanted them to really mirror each other throughout the story. Both see other people as beneath them at first, but slowly grow to love the people that they have. So, I feel like Fawn's loss is more impactful if Bubbles is allowed to have a happy ending.

Thank you so much for reading. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:23

Mar 28, 2025

The jump from third person to first person came as a bit of a surprise for me. It's clearly intentional, and it does work once I adjusted to it. I think it's a welcome change for this chapter, since we get to see some more internal thoughts.

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:6

Mar 28, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

Thank you. I think some elements feel a bit samey because actually hitting 25k words on this concept was… tough.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:23

Mar 28, 2025

I can hear the slap. It’s satisfying.

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:1

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