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Himicchi

Hello! I'm Himitsu... a Himitsu? Just call me Himicchi! I've written a few fantasy stories. Currently I'm working on "The Second World" for the isekai contest.

registered at: Mar 07, 2025

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Apr 01, 2025

Subbed ‘Ghost Story’ vibes or Dubbed ‘Ghost Story’ vibes?

Really, fun start. The characters have unique personalities, but I’m still learning to tell them apart. Interested to see where this goes.

Whispering Ghoststories

Chapter:1

Mar 31, 2025

To:Lihinel

Yet.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:5

Mar 29, 2025

To:obliviousbushtit

Thank you!

Capmon: Cyan Seas Version

Chapter:1

Mar 28, 2025

To:Stoneflew

I felt like Bubbles needed a happy ending, since she actually has a similar character arc to Fawn's. I wanted them to really mirror each other throughout the story. Both see other people as beneath them at first, but slowly grow to love the people that they have. So, I feel like Fawn's loss is more impactful if Bubbles is allowed to have a happy ending.

Thank you so much for reading. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:23

Mar 28, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

Thank you. I think some elements feel a bit samey because actually hitting 25k words on this concept was… tough.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:23

Mar 28, 2025

To:Slow

Thank you so much! Having you follow along as I’ve worked has given me so much motivation. I’m so glad that you enjoyed the story, it’s super meaningful!

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:23

Mar 27, 2025

To:Lihinel

It would not be better. This is dragon’s opinion of what people should think about dragon, and is not an objective reality.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:4

Mar 25, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

It’s not necessarily haha funny, so it’s not like you need to be laughing out loud at it. It is ultimately more of a psychological horror than a dark comedy, too. Even though the first few chapters felt more comedic.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:11

Mar 24, 2025

To:Lihinel

It says the beginning of this chapter in like the first para- kind of in passing!

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:2

Mar 23, 2025

To:_Caity_

Thank you for the feedback! I definitely can focus too much on character interactions, since generally my style is very character-focused. I really enjoy working on characterization, but you're probably right that it goes on a little long in this chapter.

The Soul of Ledoric's

Chapter:2

Mar 21, 2025

To:lolitroy

Unplayable tbh. Need to patch in proper digestive systems in the 1.02 update.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:1

Mar 21, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

That’s true. I felt like the setting was peculiar enough that some quick exposition was necessary. Maybe it could be a little less obviated.

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:1

Mar 15, 2025

I absolutely love the worldbuilding. The detail about unmarked graves as an element of culture is fascinating. The disdain for what humans have done is a thread I'm interested to follow up on. The praying skeletons remind me of "Made in Abyss" a little, and that's always a good thing to be reminded of.

The death of magic causing magical creatures to lash out is interesting. It makes me wonder if they're cornered; they know they're dying so they're panicking. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Letters to the Wandering Moon

Chapter:1

Mar 15, 2025

Getting to know Camille's backstory is very beautiful. The way you handled the mother's passing was heartfelt but painful. Her last words being her pride in her daughter hit me like a truck. Luca being the missing piece makes me even more worried about something happening to him!

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:7

Mar 14, 2025

Ah, understanding his backstory make it easier to follow him. He's doing it for love, and it's a bit twisted, but his grief really shows. I wonder if Luca and Camille's budding love will parallel Magnus and Eleanor in the future.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:6

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