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Hello! I'm Himitsu... a Himitsu? Just call me Himicchi! I've written a few fantasy stories. My best one is "The Princess of the Dragon's Tummy," a political satire set within a dragon's stomach.

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Mar 15, 2025

I absolutely love the worldbuilding. The detail about unmarked graves as an element of culture is fascinating. The disdain for what humans have done is a thread I'm interested to follow up on. The praying skeletons remind me of "Made in Abyss" a little, and that's always a good thing to be reminded of.

The death of magic causing magical creatures to lash out is interesting. It makes me wonder if they're cornered; they know they're dying so they're panicking. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Letters to the Wandering Moon

Chapter:1

Mar 15, 2025

Getting to know Camille's backstory is very beautiful. The way you handled the mother's passing was heartfelt but painful. Her last words being her pride in her daughter hit me like a truck. Luca being the missing piece makes me even more worried about something happening to him!

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:7

Mar 14, 2025

Ah, understanding his backstory make it easier to follow him. He's doing it for love, and it's a bit twisted, but his grief really shows. I wonder if Luca and Camille's budding love will parallel Magnus and Eleanor in the future.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:6

Mar 13, 2025

This is an interesting setup. The knight is a bit of an edgelord, so it's satisfying to see him get punished (corrected 💢👹). The elf is there to help, and I can't wait to see what her personality will be going forward. Mentor sort of?

But most importantly:

Naughty Edgelord Knight, get corrected! 💢💢💢

Enrai no Kōshi - 遠雷の孔子

Chapter:1

Mar 13, 2025

I really enjoy your dialogue.

Fortune's Gallery

Chapter:0

Mar 13, 2025

I did really enjoy the prologue, but this chapter is way more entrancing. I love the characterization of Eirin, but also of Risei. I love that the princess is this complete gremlin and her companion is just filled with secondhand embarrassment. I see way more of this story now, and I'm super excited to continue it!

SING!! The Mermaid Needs the Shiny Necklace ✧˖°.

Chapter:1

Mar 13, 2025

Ah. This is a fun turn. I like the eugenics aspect of it, it's horrifyingly utilitarian. He genuinely (wrongly) believes this will help humanity. I'm interested to see what Lyra did to betray him. As always, can't wait to read more.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:5

Mar 12, 2025

Dang, she should have just healed all of her injuries from the beatings, that's what a Healer would do /s

It's a funny start. I can't tell from just the prologue what direction it will take, but it doesn't seem generic for a fantasy setting. I'm interested in what her character arc will be. I thought it would be a comedy from the title, but I'm getting the sense it's dramatic from the start. Maybe something between, I'll have to keep going. It's fun.

Fuck you! I Don't Want to be a Healer!

Chapter:1

Mar 12, 2025

The setup with the princess leaving is a bit exciting. We get the prelude of the fisher, too. It seems like a subversion of the basic Little Mermaid plot where Princess Kei is caught up in solving the issues of other people rather than being stuck as a true "fish out of water". It's an interesting start!

SING!! The Mermaid Needs the Shiny Necklace ✧˖°.

Chapter:0

Mar 12, 2025

Ah, and Magnus is her dad (actually I think it was mentioned in an earlier chapter and I was thinking too deep and overlooked)! That happened so fast. Last chapter he was watching Luca, so he's also protecting Luca here. Camille's status here is interesting, but it's also interesting how she doesn't immediately pull rank, and allows her father to do so for her. I can't wait to see her become more assertive (if she does)

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:4

Mar 12, 2025

It's interesting to see this take on a crime against humanity, like this. The fact that the in-group appear horrified, not complacent while the government executes this shows that there could be some solidarity within the classes against the structure. It's a deeply tragic chapter, and the intersection of the two leaders, Lyra (mysterious- otherwise not mentioned) and Magnus (puppet master, maybe a little sadistic) makes me question just how much crossover they really have. If the upper society was run by a Rare from behind the scenes, it would create a very interesting twist later, though I can't wait to see what the motivation could be. And, it's perfect that Camille chooses to protect Luca rather than turning him in.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:3

Mar 11, 2025

I love how supportive Sarah is "you deserve him" was already kind of doki-doki before we even see them really fall in love with each other. I actually really like this pacing choice to have them confess to each other quickly, so many things are like trying to be this long slow burn, and there's a place for it, but it doesn't always work. The setup with them falling in love while longing to see the Earth is so beautiful. Thematically, it's this synthetic thing keeping them away from reality, and I wonder if it's almost a metaphor for sudden love?

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:2

Mar 11, 2025

There's an interesting setup to a mystery here. Liam's delusional determination really comes through, it's a fun characterization. I find the voice of Liam as a narrator to be quite funny, "I was six feet tall by the way," is so conversational that it really comes across like he's just casually telling us this story. It works for the setup.

Deadly Attraction

Chapter:1

Mar 11, 2025

To:Umut Berkay

Absolutely. It really comes across. I’m very excited to read more, but it was late last night so I was browsing through some intros. Definitely one I’ll be reading more of.

Synthetic Smiles

Chapter:1

Mar 10, 2025

The girl is interesting. She reads as otherworldly in that she already knows what he's written in his note, and she's certain that she wants to deal with Vansh specifically. I was a bit unsure why Vansh is so deadset not to talk to anybody, I was assuming he's just very introverted.

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