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Hello! I'm Himitsu... a Himitsu? Just call me Himicchi! I've written a few fantasy stories. My best one is "The Princess of the Dragon's Tummy," a political satire set within a dragon's stomach.
himitsunohanadesu@gmail.com
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Mar 28, 2025
The jump from third person to first person came as a bit of a surprise for me. It's clearly intentional, and it does work once I adjusted to it. I think it's a welcome change for this chapter, since we get to see some more internal thoughts.
To:Cashew Cocoa
Thank you. I think some elements feel a bit samey because actually hitting 25k words on this concept was… tough.
I can hear the slap. It’s satisfying.
To:Slow
Thank you so much! Having you follow along as I’ve worked has given me so much motivation. I’m so glad that you enjoyed the story, it’s super meaningful!
Mar 27, 2025
To:Lihinel
It would not be better. This is dragon’s opinion of what people should think about dragon, and is not an objective reality.
Mar 25, 2025
It’s not necessarily haha funny, so it’s not like you need to be laughing out loud at it. It is ultimately more of a psychological horror than a dark comedy, too. Even though the first few chapters felt more comedic.
Mar 24, 2025
It says the beginning of this chapter in like the first para- kind of in passing!
Mar 23, 2025
To:_Caity_
Thank you for the feedback! I definitely can focus too much on character interactions, since generally my style is very character-focused. I really enjoy working on characterization, but you're probably right that it goes on a little long in this chapter.
Mar 21, 2025
To:lolitroy
Unplayable tbh. Need to patch in proper digestive systems in the 1.02 update.
That’s true. I felt like the setting was peculiar enough that some quick exposition was necessary. Maybe it could be a little less obviated.
Mar 15, 2025
I absolutely love the worldbuilding. The detail about unmarked graves as an element of culture is fascinating. The disdain for what humans have done is a thread I'm interested to follow up on. The praying skeletons remind me of "Made in Abyss" a little, and that's always a good thing to be reminded of.
The death of magic causing magical creatures to lash out is interesting. It makes me wonder if they're cornered; they know they're dying so they're panicking. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Getting to know Camille's backstory is very beautiful. The way you handled the mother's passing was heartfelt but painful. Her last words being her pride in her daughter hit me like a truck. Luca being the missing piece makes me even more worried about something happening to him!
Mar 14, 2025
Ah, understanding his backstory make it easier to follow him. He's doing it for love, and it's a bit twisted, but his grief really shows. I wonder if Luca and Camille's budding love will parallel Magnus and Eleanor in the future.
Mar 13, 2025
This is an interesting setup. The knight is a bit of an edgelord, so it's satisfying to see him get punished (corrected 💢👹). The elf is there to help, and I can't wait to see what her personality will be going forward. Mentor sort of?
But most importantly:
Naughty Edgelord Knight, get corrected! 💢💢💢
I really enjoy your dialogue.
