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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.
May 15, 2025
You've kept up the tension throughout the chapters and this one keeps it going without any feeling of going stale!
Ooooooohhh he's gonna get torn up good. But sadly, he gets to be a monster for a few more chapters. Jerk.
To:farfriar42
What if Nyx is real?
Maybe I just need to get better at saying certain words so they happen.
*Starts chanting 'cake' repeatedly*
Just imagine people complaining: "Hey, why was the Princess awake for an hour when I wanted to sleep." Awkward.
You should start a homeless cake charity!
Poor Symphon. He's just a veteran soldier from a doomed dark world looking for love.
Man, that would make a horrible profile on a dating app! 😳
To:Sakura Mazaki
Nyx is really dark. So just how did Shiori end up being a Princess of Nyx?
I hope the story ends up being exciting and fun!
Geez, what is going on with Motohara and Otonashi? Two guys, very different styles.
To:Kantaru
I love this feedback! Please tell me if anything isn't working for you or is confusing. I hope you love Shiori's story!
May 14, 2025
Jade is the unexpected ladies man and the dynamic with Ariel makes sense. This has a very casual, cozy feeling as it develops.
Conner is a sharp guy and easy to get along with. This glance into their lives works well, and I feel like Conner is quickly figuring out that something is off.
To:Japanese🌹Rose
I've got plans for a sequel and even a epilogue chapter. I would love your feedback on the ending since it has been so useful throughout!
I have a feeling Tsubame might be familiar with all kinds of trouble. 😄
I liked the idea of an Emporia and needed to introduce it early enough that I could use it later. Hopefully it wasn't too confusing.
I liked writing Otonashi through this part and hope he's fun to read as the story develops. I appreciate all of the feedback.
May 10, 2025
I figured it was Janice even bfmefore she said her name. What a peach.
Love how things are building.
Now Jade must do battle with... Windows!
Shiori can't seem to catch a break! Things will get more mixed up and dangerous, but hopefully the ride is fun!