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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.

registered at: Mar 16, 2025

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Jun 02, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

I love that you follow these things so closely. Hopefully you find the Motohara story arch interesting.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:23

May 31, 2025

Nice to see Janice failing, but this only feels like a bigger conflict on the way. I get the sense that more growth from Ariel happens first though...

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:24

May 31, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Well she's doomed if she had to survive in Nyx all alone and without supplies, but how can she handle Motohara? 🤔

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:22

May 29, 2025

Jade's strong confidence works well here. The moments pushing into Ariel's thoughts also works well. Looking forward to Janice getting her's.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:23

May 29, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Totally right. I wouldn’t want to be against someone like Otonashi/Symphon on the battlefield.

But what is Shiori going to do now that she's stuck in Nyx?

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:21

May 29, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Darn it Shiori! She's not at all used to the idea of letting someone get killed, but she cold pick a better time to intervene, right?

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:20

May 27, 2025

Great buildup of Orsted/Jade. The sudden new transfer student Jade is about to make big waves. Look out Janice.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:22

May 27, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

The question is, how did he get that much power?

The fun part is, you've already read how he got it, but it won't be obvious for a couple chapters yet! Man, I'm devious and slightly irritating! 😇

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:19

May 27, 2025

Finally Jade in the fight. Looking forward to how he resolves this.

For Ariel's own internal battles (feeling unworthy of the jewelry etc.) I'm hoping for an even more satisfying conclusion.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:21

May 26, 2025

The adults are proving a failure, exactly as Ariel seems to worry they will be.

Good to see her somewhat standing up for herself.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:20

May 26, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Good thinking. Tsubame had a similar headache, and even Shiori did in the earlier chapters. Something is going on...

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:17

May 23, 2025

The amount of everyday events and conversations in the story make everything feel more real and special at the same time.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:19

May 23, 2025

The dynamics they have going keep getting better. So funny that Ariel copies with psychological explanations rather than realize he likes her. Great dramatic irony.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:18

May 23, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Tsubame is fun to write. Such a ham.

The tension with Symphon/Otonashi coming to a head was fun to write. I found myself writing faster through these next few chapters, excited to get the ideas out.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:16

May 23, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

I always struggle planning reveals on new information. Often I make things too complex. Hopefully it all makes sense and is fun to read.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:15