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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.
May 09, 2025
To:farfriar42
Mores/Motohara had been through some stuff!
I don't think he ought to hold out for a comforting hug from Symphon just yet. 🙃
"Oops, sorry, didn't see that tree branch. Ah, dang, that's gonna leave a mark!" 😂
Oh, the Duke is gonna get his, but only after he's done a bit more to earn it. 😡
Conner reminds me of some people I've met in the Army. Wish I had more time to make it to the next chapter faster.
Ariel has two very different men in her life now, and doesn't want either of them near her problems. It creates a good dramatic tension.
First signs that Jade is worried about home. Looking forward to seeing how that develops!
To:Sakura Mazaki
Well you're clever! Yeah, the Proncesses of Nyx are really important, and apparently Shiori is one of them?
We'll have more detailed info on Princesses later, and hopefully that proves to be a fun read!
I hate that guy and I wrote him!
The Duke is a piece of work. I hope you find the completion of Motohara's arc fun and endearing.
Why Shiori?!
Actually, she's got him right where she wants him! 🤫
Mayyyybeee. Please do let me know if I pull it off and the redemption arc works for you!
May 08, 2025
Excellent job finishingbl this book. Cute having one of them blush like a tomato and the other like a tomatillo!
You've got a cohesive book here that knows what it is about and has really been a popular read on the website. Bravo!
The "word from the A-unit" transition works well.
Dark turn right near the end makes the conclusion all-the-more enjoyable.
Jade walks the line between chivalrous and pushy in a way that Ariel seems to like. I can just imagine how shocked she'll be when she stops rationalizing him as just being friendly.
Lots more to come about the magic system, and also more to come about strawberry cake! 😋
Frequent flyer miles for Kenji.
Looks like all of the dangerous action right at the end is going to he on Planet X.