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May 17, 2025
To:Kuro
Thank you! I’m glad the realism works well so far. :)
Wait, what’s Yuta even doing in the club if he doesn’t sing or play an instrument? Is he just there for emotional support? xD I can’t wait to see Lyra’s reaction on their performance haha.
This entire chapter gave me that same feeling I experienced while watching/reading famous music anime or novels. There are just way too few out there, we really need more from the musical romance genre🥲 I’m glad I found your story to fill that gap!
Ahh it’s finally time to return to my favourite novel on here :D I really wonder how long it’ll take Yuta to figure out the truth about Lyra. I’m still angry with her that she lied about the whole boyfriend stuff😭
Didn’t you say about my story that it was dangerous? I feel like letting an elf move in right after he kissed you is pretty much as dangerous xD Anyways, Jade is so flirty, looks like Ariel is already hypnotised by his charme.
To:Sakura Mazaki
You’d be surprised to hear what people do to get away from their toxic environment. But marrying a stranger is not something I would do either xD
May 16, 2025
Thank you so much for the feedback! It took me a while to express these feelings in the opening scene, so I'm glad you liked it!
Many scenes are based on the incidents regarding the Berlin wall, but I also tried to add my own personal touch as much as possible. Hope you'll enjoy it!
Crowds are the worst thing about these events, I don't know how anyone can keep up with so many people.
Thank you for your comments!
May 15, 2025
Well that’s what you call a start, straight to business. I didn’t expect a love confession straight away, neither did I think someone would get wiped from existence xD Very nice first chapter, will definitely read more
I still have nightmares of all the times a teacher randomly called me up during class .-. Yuuna absolutely loves desserts, so she eats them whenever she gets the chance haha
May 14, 2025
That kiss in the beginning totally came out of nowhere, I did not expect that at all xD I really liked the dialogue here, will try to come back for the later chapters!
Thank you so much! I hope you’ll find the next chapters interesting as well! :)
May 10, 2025
I LOVE the name of the chapter. Also, I really enjoy it whenever you describe the atmosphere and Yuta’s feelings. Especially the opening paragraph with “her very presence declaring its independence from the outside world” is amazing. Not sure if I like these parts or the fun, messy dialogues more haha.
Who even sleeps with their curtains open? God, I’ll never understand how people can do that xD
Anyways, I was little confused what the 7-1 and 7-2 numbers mean, guess they just indicate some sort of sub-chapters?
Well, guess we know who appeared in Ariel's backyard now xD I didn't expect a full chapter focused on backstory, but I enjoyed it a lot. Nicely done!
Interesting start, I like how you instantly create tension and make us root for one side. I did not see the end of the chapter coming, I wonder what kind of person fell into her backyard 👀
If I could give one piece of advice, I sometimes found it a bit hard to figure out who was speaking on my first read, so I had to go through a couple of passages multiple times.