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Jul 26, 2021
Strong start. I could really feel the emotion in every line of dialogue. I will continue!
Jul 24, 2021
To:Makech
Thank you! This chapter, as well as the last, I've been very excited to write since the beginning of the story, so I'm glad that they held the emotional impact that I meant for when I began. Keep rooting for Jiro!
Jul 23, 2021
To:Ana Fowl
Ty I will 😤
To:kazesenken
I appreciate the continued analysis of the story from a more personal perspective, as it helps me properly gauge whether or not I'm conveying the correct moods and emotions as I go along. I'll keep doing my best!
It was a very important chapter, and I actually even ended up screwing up my upload schedule to make sure it was exactly what I wanted it to be (Oops). But I'm glad that that effort has paid off in full, so thank you for the compliments! Keep rooting for Jiro!
Jul 22, 2021
To:Alyssa Aurinia
You're the the 26th caller today
Jul 21, 2021
Great fight scene, though I do feel that the areas where Augusto's past was explained thoroughly took away from the immersion of the fight at some points. But still, great over all!
Just when I was starting to get comfortable again, my guilt comes crawling back. Damn you, kaze!
Information on witches: 5 silver
Liquor and boobie time: priceless
To:Hades
Good to hear it hit the right beats. Things pick up from here, so stay tuned!
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Jul 16, 2021
Always here to do my best
Jul 15, 2021
To:JK
While it hasn't quite gotten to the more clear "plot" yet, I think you're right in the fact anyway that I need to more clearly establish it, and do so soon. I will make sure to focus on that in my next chapters. Thank you.
I'll take it as a compliment 💪
Jul 14, 2021
It seems we are emotional first chapter buddies.