Ine Airlcana

Ine Airlcana

Hello, people!
I'm Ine Airlcana, and I strive to write the good stuff for my readers! (And I also illustrate a bit on the side, yeah.)

I'm currently active on DeviantArt, Honeyfeed, Patreon, Twitter, and WattPad.

DeviantArt: Obviously Art.
Honeyfeed: Short Stories (Monthly Writing Challenges!)
Patreon: Mostly my Web Novel, Flawed Connections:
Twitter: Gushing about other OELN authors, for the most part... lol.
WattPad: Fanfiction, at the moment just a Pokémon one.

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    Aug 05, 2020

    Was anyone else reminded of Baywatch when that youngest male teacher arrived on the scene?
    Was I the only one who imagined him sprinting along the sunny beach in slow-motion, his muscular body gleaming with the holy energy of confidence and sex-appeal?
    No?
    Know you no classics?

    Anyway.

    I believe I've made the comparison before, but now I'll repeat it because my theories have been confirmed.
    This is so much like Classroom of the Elite it's crazy.
    At least the point system.
    There were some tweaks to it, like there being no total outcasts who don't score high and waste all their money but only smart people (who have the potential for doing dumb stuff, too).
    Where this one shines most brightly, though, is the addition of the virtual setting.
    Ana Fowl said it, and so I'll quote her here.

    "The school lore is very interesting so far, I'm enjoying this mix between sci-fi and slife-of-life mixed with survival."

    The physical exams Classroom of the Elite had will probably still play a part here, but also the virtual stuff.
    I wonder if this will be like in SAO, where programs like Gun Gale Online are used to train soldiers, and stuff, only with education and real-life survival focus in here.

    They're really testing their students, though.
    The stress of failing right at the beginning had to be really bad for some people. Glad to see Katsu pass, though.
    Would've been strange if he didn't, but the idea of a secret classroom for the failures of the exam like in Assassination Classroom would've been highly enjoyable, too.
    That being said, I'm glad for what this story is because my interest is peaked and I want to dive right into this experience!

    Enough with the set-up, let the games begin!

    Ine Airlcana

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    The Talents of Kaino High
    Chapter:2


    Aug 04, 2020

    It is said that there is a difference between natural talent and the proficiency earned through hard work.
    If you spend the first ten years of your life learning how to talk, read, and write, and not at a very high level, at that, are you the same as someone who could do all of that by the time they were six?
    There are the strangest talents out there, some of them we call childhood prodigies.
    Those are the ones with natural talent.
    Those who work hard(er) to learn everything are hard workers. They have passion, they have a drive, and they know what it's like to not be the best because they work hard to keep up with the competition they know is out there, waiting for them to fail.
    Fiction explored this concept for years, now, but is there a definite answer to the question of who is better?
    No.
    Logic clearly dictates that the talented start out strong, but as they can easily grow complacent and bored with the lack of competition, they are prone to not work as hard as someone who knows only defeat.
    At the same time, the hard worker without talent has a finite limit that's much lower than the talented's limit.
    Some even say that a hard-working AND talented youth has unlimited potential and can grow forever.
    As for if that's true...

    I expect this series to explore that concept, too, but back to what's actually happening in here, lol.
    I hate remembering names.
    Especially being forced to do so.
    In class, the teachers treat it like some kind of game, but names will come to me naturally, and if I don't know someone as well, it obviously takes longer to learn his name.
    That's nothing disrespectful, that's just how it is.
    That is the natural way of things.
    Yet they pressure us into learning them on the first day, or else we'll be lynched in the opinion of society.
    As a plot-device and introduction (along with repetitive repetitions of the names so that us readers may remember them, too), it's alright, though. It adds to the pressure and suspense in this case, too, which I can certainly appreciate.

    150 names in 20 minutes, though...
    I wonder if there was actually an application list on their website or if they sent a mail or something.
    That seems like a bit much...
    Then again, it's entirely possible.
    There are some tricks to memorization, like adding pictures, jokes, and weird idioms to the name to make it pop more. Strangely enough, more information is easier remembered than less.

    Whatever this rambling comment tried to say, I'm loving this.
    Gimme ever more.

    Ine Airlcana

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    The Talents of Kaino High
    Chapter:1

    Aug 04, 2020

    What a sweet little chapter.
    It's another one of those cases where I desperately wish for the author to come back and grace us with another episode in the lives of these wonderful people.
    Now it's not only Elias but Takumi, too.

    The dynamic between them seems so smooth.
    I wonder how a social outcast like Elias made a friend like him, though, not to forget the incredible coincidence of Elias's only friend being a veterinarian in a story where the main character finds a lost puppy...
    Anyway, great dynamic.
    Coincidences rule the world, anyway. 😂

    These stories are quite well-known, though.
    A lonely soul finally reconnects with the world after meeting with that special animal (mostly dogs) that changes their life.
    Sometimes, an animal is just the connection you need.
    Maybe that person doesn't feel comfortable around people, or maybe that person lost faith in humanity and his peers.
    The smallest things can cause this.
    This feeling is only human.
    Who could even save such a soul if he automatically saw you as nothing but a nuisance?
    The answer is something without any human qualities.

    Sure, dogs are smart, but their whole style of living is different from a human's.
    There are always the odd ones out, but for the most part, dogs are very affectionate and passionate about their owners.

    Those poor souls who are allergic to dog hair, though...
    They probably end up with a dozen cats, instead.

    If you, Ferren, will ever continue this series, I would expect Elias to meet many people, among them different pet-owners, too.
    Maybe it was always intended as a short series, too, and in that case, I'd be fine with him learning to love life and people just a bit more.
    Whatever the case, I'd love a continuation.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Stray Dog Style
    Chapter:2


    Aug 04, 2020

    And I'm finally here... or, well, it was inevitable.
    As of the moment of me writing this, this is the earliest work on Honeyfeed that wasn't taken down.
    The 8th novel to be created, in fact.
    I feel like I'm discovering history, here!
    This is so exciting! 😆

    KenjiPark97's comment reflect my thoughts.
    One just has to think of the viral Kantai Collection whenever the talk of military in combination with ships is started.
    Even though there seem to be no ship girls in this one.
    Just cute lieutenants and privates.

    Ranna isn't even on a ship, yet, just dreaming about it.
    As there were no updates for years, now, I guess Cafard abandoned this story, which is pretty sad.
    It showed such promise, too.

    It seems to be something like a comedic-style military adventure.
    Anime tropes like the toast and not being moe enough to captain a ship are funny, and the characters are cute and described in typical anime-fashion with beet-red heads and bangs hiding the face while they blush furiously.
    I wonder what happened?
    Did life catch up with Cafard and made him stop writing?
    Or did he get so caught up in crafting new series that this one just fell under the radar?

    On the off-chance that you're reading this, please show us some signs of life.
    The community was strong in the early days, and it can be even stronger, now! A few dedicated individuals are assembling, the big voices of this platform as it is today, and you experienced veterans would fit right in!

    Grant us this wish, dear Cafard.
    Make me see more of Mei, the cute Private.
    Make me see more of Ranna, the proud Lieutenant.
    Make me see more of the rift that formed between them and how they get to the bottom of the eternal question... should duty come before friendship, or should friendship outweigh everything?

    All is fair in love and war.
    If we ever get a continuation, I'd love to read it.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Ranna-chan, Oblivious to the End
    Chapter:1

    Aug 03, 2020

    There's so much good in this.
    Relatability, character moments, urgency, mystery, that's a strong package of goodness.
    Again, there's so much good in this.

    I like that last part very much.
    "The 25 of you with the lowest scores will not be expelled on the spot. I repeat. The 25 of you with the lowest scores will be expelled on the spot."
    Reading it makes me think that you either forgot to delete the 'not' in the first version, or this was deliberate to confuse the kids.
    And to cause mayhem.
    Cause Mayhem is fun.
    Especially dissolving into mayhem.
    This sounds like the ship entered some acid waters by the name of 'Mayhem,' or maybe the specific acid is called 'Mayhem.' Then the ship LITERALLY starts dissolving.
    There's an idea for a novel if anyone wants to write it, lol.

    They say it's super hard to make a character's voices unique to themself. The end goal would be to distinguish them not by any dialogue-tags like 'he said,' or 'Tomoko spoke,' but solely by the content of their speech and the way they talk.
    I believe you managed to do that with the people on the ship.

    That main character, though.
    I studied hard to get my phone back.
    I love it.
    Kids these days would do a lot to get their phone back from their parents, but to think he had a stack of plans ranging from a to z and he still failed, lol. I wonder what plan z was. Crying for mercy?
    Some parents are weak to their offspring's tears.
    In Pokémon-terms, those attacks are very effective!
    There's even an attack called 'Fake Tears' in that game, isn't there? I thusly claim that the comparison is entirely validated.

    I kinda understand the want to get out of the nest, too.
    You think about all the cool stuff you get, like freedom and less nagging from your parent, but the nasty responsibilities and challenges completely slip your mind.
    That Kaino High is like college, in that regard.

    Imagine being accepted to a school and immediately having to quit, though.
    First, they wait till you let your guard down, and then... they STRIKE! Poor students, but I guess that's how life is.
    These guys are geniuses, anyway, so they'll probably manage.
    Quirky geniuses, but they say that the smarter a person, the weirder they are. This can manifest in many ways, so most weird people are probably just that. Weird.
    Weird does not equal Smart.

    Anyway, kinda reminds me of Classroom of the Elite, which is good!
    I'll read more!

    Ine Airlcana

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    The Talents of Kaino High
    Chapter:0


    Jul 30, 2020

    I wonder what's in people's minds, too, sometimes.

    What is in people's minds?
    I need to know.
    Or else, I will never be able to move on.

    There's this German book called Danton's Death by Georg Büchner, in which he describes a similar predicament.
    In an early scene (which is why this is not a spoiler, though I doubt anyone reading this will ever read that particular book), Danton talks to his wife, who should be fairly close to him.
    The conversation goes in a philosophical direction, and in a sudden wave of pessimism, Danton talks about how he can't even understand those closest to him.
    He goes on to say that one had to cut a skull open and look at the bain itself to understand that person.
    That is interesting on many levels.

    For one, it says that one had to try really hard to understand another human, which is true.
    It takes effort and it's oftentimes littered with failure, as delicate as the actual surgery of the head/brain.
    Then again, this act could literally kill someone, if done without proper procedures, hinting at the risks of looking deeper. Platonic friendships often don't last through the truth, which is also hinted at in this scene.
    All in all, it throws up more questions than it answers.
    Don't we know that from another series?

    I'm just rolling with whatever it is I'm rolling with here, and talk about Monogatari and a quote from Hachikuji.
    She says that looking behind the curtain, trying to find out what's in there, leaves more room for questions, many more than you could ever answer, in fact.
    There won't ever be an end to information.
    There's always another layer, another aspect we don't know about. We must dig down to the deepest and smallest nuances before understanding the big picture, but how long will that take?
    One life isn't enough.
    I doubt a few dozen generations are enough, either.
    Information might truly be infinite.

    Ok, whatever that was, I'm ready to talk about the chapter, now.
    Just briefly, though.
    The above was a lot, already.

    Liliana is a good leader, I feel.
    Knowing that she's high-born does make the comparison to Mimi all the clearer, though.
    The only one who has to act more like a Trance-Squat counterpart is Ono, who has to become even cuter to match Mia.
    I wonder if that'll even happen.

    There's a sense of loneliness throughout the whole volume.
    May is gone for most of the time, and the main squat doesn't get nearly as much screentime as they need to get completely fleshed out.
    At this point, they're even dragged to the background, almost replaced by a new squat.
    Basically, we only really know Aura, and even he's shrouded in mystery.
    Hence, the sense of loneliness.

    Aura wants to understand but doesn't.
    He wants to know but isn't sure about how he should approach the situation.
    He's held captive by himself, and he doesn't like it.
    He's ready to move on.
    He's ready to grow.

    Let's watch him do so.

    (Just one more chapter to go, btw.)

    Ine Airlcana

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    Chapter:31

    Jul 30, 2020

    Don't do anything stupid.
    Haila, I implore you to tell that to the school. Sending first-year students on a mission like this is more than dangerous enough, you dunce!
    Aura is probably right in thinking that some died on a mission, though I, too, am curious about what the school does in such cases.
    Probably not all that much.
    I wonder if the bandits really pose that little a threat when one of them almost killed Aura and a group of them almost did the same to him and Olen earlier in the series, too.
    Sure, May dispatched them with apparent ease, but Aura is a first-year first-week student at this school.
    I can't help but worry...

    Let's not be stupid, team!

    It's fine that Aura is thinking about people and their thoughts around him, but it all sounds so unnatural.
    Why would he care about the boy who just tried to kill him the night before?
    I know that I'd be furious with rage and my mind might be clouded with anger at this point.
    Maybe Aura is just one of those empathy-monsters we see so much of in fiction.
    Not sure how I feel about that, though.

    Mia was cute during the reunion, pulling them all in for the hug.
    She's such an angel.
    The others can stare in jealousy all they want, this group is the hottest quartet on the block!
    Though they won't spend the mission together.

    Some of the other people seemed less pleased with the mates they got.
    I wonder why?
    Humans like some and dislike another, and that assessment changes in the blink of an eye.
    I guess this is a lesson they have to learn.
    Let's see if they can start trusting in their neighbors when they confront life-threatening situations together.
    That seems to work quite frequently.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Chapter:29

    Jul 30, 2020

    I don't want to say I told ya, but...
    I FUCKING TOLD YA!

    Honestly, if there's a dangerous sound in the woods (though this assassin didn't do his job very well if he was heard because of a rumbling sound... his stomach?), you don't just lie down and sleep.
    What the hell are you doing, Aura?
    Still, that assassin is a total bloke.
    A useless piece of brainless human organism, ready to be thrown out the window and abandoned in a street.
    Allow me to explain.

    There are many efficient ways to kill a group of five people.
    Away from society... where nobody can hear them scream...
    I'm sure he had orders to kill them before they arrived at the new place, which meant he was in a hurry, but attacking them on the way back would've yielded better results, for one.
    They would've been relaxed, let their guards down, and BOOM!
    Pentakill!
    Let's work with the actual scenario a bit, though.

    Nightmare poison.
    From what Andri told Aura, the poison still works with a lower dosage, even though it's easier to dispel with an antidote, then.
    Even if he had orders to kill only Aura, making sure that every one of his companions was unable to fight back would've been priority number one in this situation.
    Coated knives and blades, oral transmission, poisoned darts, arrows, or bolts, maybe even gas, there are so many ways to make all five of them, including Maerten, useless.
    First should've been Andri because he has the antidote, though Maerten probably comes even before him, as he doesn't sleep in the same tent as the kids.
    Heck, it would've taken no more than one slash along their foreheads with a coated blade to freeze all four kids, and stabbing them to death from there would've been easy.
    This guy is useless.
    He had it coming.
    I'm a noob at assassination, and I dare to claim that my plan was better than anything he came up with.
    Fucking useless.
    He won't ever be hired as an assassin, again...

    Though I guess that's fine.
    We need Aura, at the very least, to finish this story.
    The rest would be nice to keep, too.

    Leaving that behind, though, we have more Maria-content before any of that happens.
    Let's freaking go!

    We finally get some answers as to why Maria wrote those letters to her mother, wanting her to come back.
    The parents didn't get along all that well, it seems.
    How young were they, here?
    The girls didn't seem to notice apart from Maria.
    The father's gesture at the end does say a lot, too...

    He touches her face, not her hand.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Chapter:28

    Jul 30, 2020

    Some rumbling noises from the woods, but I don't mind it. It's probably just some animal...
    ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?

    After discussing how they're in bad territory already, as well as describing actual animal sounds, he hopes that this 'rumbling noise' is just another animal, and definitely not - god, beware! - a dangerous assassin or even a BIG-BOY animal like a bear or something?
    Rumbling, as in gurgling stomach?
    Aura, you are a fucking dunce!

    Andri, though...
    "Will you join us?" (to Liliana)
    Lol.
    Is he secretly thirsty for that booty?
    Is he a so-called closet pervert?

    This group does have a similar dynamic to the previous one, albeit slightly altered, of course.
    Liliana resembles Mimi, being a bit scratchy at first but becoming more docile as the story progresses.
    Aura resembles Aura because he is Aura.
    Andri resembles Jayde, as the comparison between potion-makers and cooks has been made before and Andri can cook, too.
    Ono resembles Mia. He is quieter than her, but he has that same cuteness effect on Aura as Mia's clutz-behavior has.
    So much for that.

    The beginning conversations were a bit corny.
    Forget about that, concentrate on the present, don't let the past haunt you...
    It's not as easy as all that.
    You didn't need to tell me that Jay was lying because OF FUCKING COURSE he was lying!
    I could see that from his demeanor!
    The saying goes 'show, DON'T tell,' not 'show AND tell.'

    It was still fine, though.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Jul 30, 2020

    Didn't see that coming, honestly.
    I should've, with the increase in bandit activities and Olen (OELN) being a merchant.
    Did Jay just prophesize the death of the OELN community?
    I don't like that...

    But to think he'd just... collapse.
    What the hell?
    Is that the typical reaction to someone dying?
    Probably not, but then again, the death of those close to you can come as quite a shock, can't it?
    There are those that readily deny the unpleasant stuff, those that seem unfazed but release their sadness in quiet, those that are actually unfazed, those that collapse (apparently), and many more.
    I guess I can accept that.
    His losing both his old house and the people he was close to probably seems like losing another life, just like the one he had before he died.
    Living in Dirya with May, attending the school, and learning how to do magic can seem like a new start, at least.
    RIP Aura's old life.
    Aura of Orma is no more...
    He will be Aura of Dirya, soon.

    Thinking about how only a week has passed in-universe is crazy.
    Aura traveled from his homeplace to Dirya, befriended three (plus these guys, now) people, and is now sent on a deadly mission.
    He couldn't even do simple magic before, mind you.
    When you consider that this house was empty for like a week, you'd think there wouldn't be another family in there so soon after, no?
    And new occupants living in Olen's house a few days after he died?
    Guess they are lodging-vultures.
    They take what they find, even if the owner is just on vacation.
    That's what could've happened with May, at least.
    Oh, well.

    Move your feet, lose your seat.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Jul 30, 2020

    I wonder if this is the constellation that will be sent on the collaboration-missions from now on.
    It would make some sense, thinking about how hard it is to get used to new people, though that may be the goal of these missions, too, always having to rely on different people and learning how to function with anyone and any time.
    Let's see how it works.

    Is this... the second time Aura has been branded as a womanizing lecher who only wants to hit on girls?
    Or does that sound too crass?
    That may be too crass...
    Anyway, Liliana isn't serious, she has too much brains for her own good if she starts suspecting someone is hitting on her for simple small talk.
    There's also a chance of her being too nervous to think about anything but the mission she's about to go on, but that's all speculation.
    It's just a theory.
    A light novel theory!

    Having recently read Beyond the Borders with a similarly-named character, Lylianna, I am inclined to compare the two, now.
    BTB-Lylianna is a stifler for rules and would happily kill herself if she were ordered to do so.
    AS-Liliana seems to have a serious mindset, though we know too little about her as of this moment.
    Let's see if they have more comparable traits to each other.

    And they have to buy camping gear.
    They should've expected that, considering that they have to travel a day there, defeat the bandits, and still come back (if they make it... too dark?).
    That's two days of travel plus an unknown amount of time to defeat the evil bandits lurking in the forest.
    It's strange to think that they have to go so far, though.
    There were bandits on the road from Orma to this place, too, weren't there?
    I hope nothing goes wrong...
    Well, we all know what kind of effect these words have on fate.

    Ine Airlcana

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