Ine Airlcana

Ine Airlcana

Hello, people!
I'm Ine Airlcana, and I strive to write the good stuff for my readers! (And I also illustrate a bit on the side, yeah.)

I'm currently active on DeviantArt, Honeyfeed, Patreon, Twitter, and WattPad.

DeviantArt: Obviously Art.
Honeyfeed: Short Stories (Monthly Writing Challenges!)
Patreon: Mostly my Web Novel, Flawed Connections:
Twitter: Gushing about other OELN authors, for the most part... lol.
WattPad: Fanfiction, at the moment just a Pokémon one.

registered at: Jun 12, 2020
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    Jul 04, 2020

    May shakes her Blaziken and starts to explain the whole system:
    "Basically, you will be separated into one of four houses. This practice is totally not inspired by Harry Potter, no, no. Get that thought out of your head immediately. A talking tool will tell you where to go... maybe. That hasn't really been revealed yet. Tehe~~"
    Olen: "You see, Aura, May is spe-"
    May: "Petrificus Totalus."
    Olen: "..."
    Aura: "... Nice."

    I actually outdid myself with that little conversation up there.
    Now I find it difficult to write anything meaningful I didn't already talk about... well, I shall manage as per usual.
    Rambling and repetition.
    That makes a comment long and juicy.

    To my previous commenters, I say this: You're right.
    This chapter focuses heavily on the inner monologue of Aura, as he comes into contact with situations and places he's not familiar with.

    Namely:
    1 - May rescuing him.
    2 - Dirya.

    May is specifically designed to be the leader of the 616th Special Information Battalion.
    You can thank me later for clearing that one up.
    She rudely stopped Olen from this revelation, after all.

    By the way, how does she intend to hide her awesomeness when she achieves one amazing feat after another?
    She single-handedly fought off a bandit group, which is impressive even when they were surprised by her arrival.
    She managed to stop Olen from talking, which was specified as 'impossible' in the coding of this story. (I cracked the security and looked at it, you might wanna do something about that weak protection program, Jay.)
    The guard was shocked to see the letter, which we can assume said more than 'May is a maestro.'

    By the way, does she play the flute or something?
    Are those spells actually song lyrics and magicians actually singers? If they form a group, are they a band?
    Do spells work better if they are being sung?

    You might have realized this, but I'm really having my fun with these comments now.
    I love making jokes about good stories.

    I might've drifted off at some places, but good job Jay.
    This is the quality I'm looking for in a good web novel.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Another Story [Hiatus]
    Chapter:4

    Jul 04, 2020

    The ominous fortune of our main character came crashing into him.
    Now I gotta think that May is the one from Pokémon, having dyed her hair and now saving random kids that got reincarnated into other worlds.
    It would be just another story for her, so to say...
    Get it?

    I mean, I've been here before, so the surprise is gone. All that's left is me laughing at the way this played out.
    To all who thought he would get it right:
    "Some half-assed determination to accurately recite something you were told once and didn't even understand won't end in success... you dunces."
    Still laughing, by the way.

    And not only because of that situation.

    First up is this awkward conversation between Olen and Aura.
    Older folks have this tendency to start warning youngsters about all the mistakes they could do and telling them their life story in the process. While this can lead to incredible conversations, you can also end up with something like this.
    He threw himself head-first into lamentation-mode and Aura into an awkward situation.
    At least the scenery was nice, I guess.

    By far my favorite sentence in this entire chapter is this:
    "... as the horse came INTO a stop."
    That stop sign must've had a lot of fun lately, lol. This was about where the chuckling started.
    Me and that nasty mind of mine.
    Naughty.
    Hehe.
    The horse CAME INTO a stop... hahaha!
    Hopefully, it wasn't impregnated.

    Well, the bandits were what you would expect.
    Typical villains who take just enough to not warrant a change of routes and still making stonks.
    Well, not entirely typical for light novels, but close enough.
    They had some brains in their heads.
    Let's hope no zombie gets reincarnated into this world, lol.
    (To all the FanFiction authors out there, please write that one! I'd send my blessings to you!)
    Back to the villains, though.
    When they can get a lot out of a kid, of course, they'd try to take everything.
    They had the manpower, the experience, and their opponents were weaklings, unadjusted to combat.
    Getting rich in one fellow swoop has that certain appeal, you know?

    Glad that Pokémon-May used her op-powers or something to stop them, though.

    Right, now I remember what I wanted to say about that spell.
    It basically turns them into Natsu on a train, right?
    I got that, right?

    See you in the next chapter.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Another Story [Hiatus]
    Chapter:3


    Jul 04, 2020

    She'll be fine, huh?
    The only chance for someone to be fine after being talked about in a line like this would be if it wasn't repeated.
    But don't worry.
    She'll be fine.

    "The sun is going over the horizon."
    What, is the sun moonwalking over some mountains or something?
    And more importantly, did you see what I did there?
    Probably not.

    I had half a mind of telling May to unleash her Blaziken on you for not getting that, but then I remembered that this wasn't Pokémon and May wasn't actually that May...
    Whatever.
    May and Aura.
    May, who'll be fine, and Aura, who... well, we shall see.
    (I repeated it again.)

    Reading this morning routine was fun.
    It didn't get boring and the descriptions were kept firm and brief, surrendering length for quality.
    I'd dare say that sacrifice was worth it.
    I think I'll get a new tic for every time they mention ticks. I can't help it, it's the power of the tics.
    Maybe I'll draw a speed-writing and/or speed-reading one someday.
    That would be nice.

    Aren't they lucky to have strawberries in their garden?
    I have to walk like half a mile to pluck them from a bush next to a playground, and either a dog pissed on them or all the good ones were plucked by the kids playing nearby already.
    I'm kinda jealous...
    ... or I would be if I didn't have the power to conjure them out of thin air.

    Airy winds, turn to strawberry-mint!
    Why mint?
    I like it.
    Leave me alone.

    Baer Kur.
    For a second I thought you were talking about a Bear-kun, and my mind immediately shifted to a Teddy-like creature similar to Bear-Bear of Exy.
    I blame my superior fantasy for that, though my drive to read all the stories out there might play a role, too.

    I even devised my own spell for this Bear-kun:
    "Reading Wakes a Strong Curiosity in the Body."

    You don't need to understand...
    Though I'll like you more if you do. 😉

    I also like May because as we concluded...
    She'll be fine.

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    Another Story [Hiatus]
    Chapter:2

    Jul 02, 2020

    Jay: "Short & Strong."
    Ine Airlcana: "... I don't have much to add to that."

    True to my nature as a novel-length commenter, though, I am sure to conjure something out of the shadow realm and onto this virtual page of comments and replies.
    I guess I am... inevitable.

    *snap*

    I have your attention, yet?
    Yes?
    Good, cause I'll go ham, now.

    I'm not sure what label to put on this story now.
    Flash Fiction? Short Story? School Romance?
    Maybe we can settle on all of the above, too. The secret answer mostly proves the most worthwhile, anyway.

    Relationships are this hard thing where you never really know what you're doing, only that you're doing something.
    Both people could have a sudden change of hearts, or the initial attraction would subside and below, a platonic relationship that's doomed to fail unveils. You never really know.
    It's a hungry commitment you have to feed, or it won't be kept alive.
    Once it's dead, you can't revive it.
    This is no Pokémon game, damn it!

    Ain't no one milk the dead cow, aight?

    That row of questions, though.
    Are they good?
    Do they fit?
    Are they beneficial to the story?
    Do they enhance the flow?
    Do they disrupt it?
    Can they play a part in the legacy of this piece?
    Did I enjoy it?
    Am I asking questions just to create a parody at this point?
    Is the answer truly a mystery?
    Do you know the answer?

    My review is not at this strange place where I can't really do more of a parody and I don't have a lot to talk about, either.
    It was simply great, and I want to thank you for this experience.

    Do I believe in good school fiction?

    After this one, I might just do so.

    My Sanpei-senpai love this story.

    Ine Airlcana

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    About You
    Chapter:3


    Jul 02, 2020

    Do I believe in a good story after the first sentence?

    I am not so sure.
    My reading journey brought me to many places, though light novels and web novels stuck with me the most.
    There, it's not really the first sentence, but the premise or the repetition that draws me in, keeps me going.
    I remember that one story and I want to see how this guy is doing it, or how that guy changed the script.
    It's mostly the same...

    And then, there are the exceptions.
    Among every genre of literature, there are these exceptional stories you can't get enough of, classics that will stick with this genre until the end, never to be forgotten.
    Every genre has it, and we're looking at something special here.

    'About You' must be flash fiction.
    It's short, it grabs our attention, and it demands the reader to read more.
    In that way, it's perfect.

    Flash fiction is anything below 1k words, and even with all three chapters combined, I'm not too sure if that benchmark has been breached.
    I'd be willing to call it a short story, too, in that case.

    What appealed to me about it is the simple structure, but the impactful choice of words and sentences.
    It's simply true, and this truth is spoken with a bluntness that makes it pleasing to read.

    Jay already commented on it, and Jay was the one who told me to read this.
    Thank him for that, as I will have to do because it's a pleasure reading this little piece of romance.

    Could this be good writing?

    I think so.

    Ine Airlcana

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    About You
    Chapter:1

    Jul 02, 2020

    I can somewhat relate to these two.
    It might be totally presumptuous of me to say this, but not having a lot of friends is a hard thing to deal with.
    I am not blind, of course, nor do I have a fat scar in my face.
    I don't even know someone who has a scar that is openly visible. I know some who have these cars from surgery on their hip or back or leg, but never somewhere visible.
    I'm really only referring to the few friends thing...
    Still, I am willing to quote a line and paraphrase it somewhat.
    "My whole life, I lived in darkness."
    But!
    "My days turned brighter because of this read."

    I still think stories with inhibitions and disabilities are too rarely written. Someone who has no taste, no hearing, can't speak, only has one arm, no legs, sits in a wheelchair, or someone who's paraplegic can provide such a beautiful story to read...
    Just like this one.

    What are some famous examples?
    A Silent Voice, where a bully of an almost-deaf, speech-impaired girl bullies her out of school but then deals with the backlash and personal feeling of guilt and her feeling inferior.
    The Intouchables, where a paraplegic man gets cared for by an imprudent guy who learns how beautiful friendship can be, and they become best friends.
    Katawa Shoujo, a visual novel that is widely regarded as a masterpiece, even though it deals with disabled girls instead of perfect anime girls... well, maybe it's because it deals with these imperfections and how the girls deal with them. Their stories touch you, you empathize, and it's so beautiful when they get a happy end.

    I guess what I'm trying to say here is that you made me very happy by writing this story.
    I formed a connection to it.

    The main character couldn't see for most of it, and his connection to Juls was purely based on everything but sight, which is what guides most of us, or at least our first impressions, of those around us.
    These first impressions quickly transform into lasting impressions because we are too slothful to change our mind about people.
    The annoying kid from fifth grade won't ever hear the end of it, even though he might've matured by now.
    Though that's besides the point.

    I enjoyed the transformation.
    We knew something was up when Juls reacted so strangely to the no-friend comment.
    It's even natural to hope for her blind friend staying blind forever in her situation. I'm glad they both agreed on growing, moving forward.
    Their happy end was so touching, I nearly cried.

    (Btw, DarkerMahogany is right. The bath scene had me laughing on the floor, which was nice in this serious story.)

    Having said all that, I do want to quote your characters again, though I'm also changing out some words...
    "This story is breathtaking."

    Ine Airlcana

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    Iridescent
    Chapter:1

    Jul 02, 2020

    Science can explain many things like the enjoyment one gets out of a web novel or the lingering feeling of satisfaction that comes from a well-crafted tale.
    Wanting to analyze this chapter of 'Is this Love?,' Ine Airlcana set out to look at this from a scientific aspect.

    Hypothesis 1: Cute Girl Enchantment.
    Something about a cute girl being involved causes people to smile more often. Especially in anime-related media, cute girls doing cute things became something like a hit with the otaku fanbase.
    The dense protagonist trope also popped up in Harem and Romance stories, wishing to extend the desperate attempt of creating a relationship for as long as possible, as the story would come to a sudden end when they finally ended up together.
    The most recent example to such a phenomenon would be Bakarina from 'My Next Life as a Villainess,' though she's only one of many examples.
    I attribute part of my enjoyment to the (presumably) cute protagonist, though her actions are undeniably cute, most just presumably so.

    Hypothesis 2: Empathy and Likeability.
    To connect a reader to a character, the author needs to create some sort of reliability, as well as make the character someone to root for.
    Here, it's completely clear that the protagonist has feelings for the man from our outside perspective, and since she's so cute, we want her to succeed and find love with this Diedrich immediately.
    Like the skeptical woman that she is, she doesn't buy it, though, and so she sets out to come up with her own ideas as to what this feeling is.
    This results in more cute moments and us empathizing with her.
    What a cutie.

    Hypothesis 3: Strong writing.
    Naturally, a story can be raised to unprecedented heights through the help of good writing.
    The way the author has her tackle these approaches in swift, but effective displays of her cuteness and scientific mindset makes it a strong and quick read you can't get enough of.
    With the end of every chapter, a shot of dopamine is released within the reader, and, wanting another shot, the next chapter is soon to be clicked.
    Then comes the plot-twist.
    We all saw it coming, but Diedrich comes back and joins her in the lab!
    Naturally, a reader couldn't pass up the opportunity to see that play out!

    My verdict is that it is a very enjoyable chapter.
    I might not have been all that scientific, but I had fun reading this chapter and writing this comment.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Is this Love?...Or are the Chemical Impulses Driving my Every Whim?
    Chapter:2

    Jun 30, 2020

    First sentence -> first thought:
    Oh, so we're talking SAO here?

    Based on the little part that comes after that, I wonder if the author is a Sonic fan? They had to wait a long time (since Sonic Mania) to get a generally well-received installment to the franchise after the old classics.
    But I digress.

    ... hell nah, I don't digress.
    Who would create a bad product if they could make quality stuff instead?
    Those who want money and know they'll get it, that's who.
    That's also what's happening to the movie industry at the moment. I heard that their licenses on certain characters could expire when they don't pump out installment after installment with them in it, and that's why they rarely invent new characters, because the old ones work and they don't need a lot of explanations to work.
    Well... let's hope the game industry keeps its high standards.

    This concept of gamer buddies meeting girl isn't new.
    We've seen it a lot, we loved it or we hated it...
    The twist here is that the one who seemed the oldest actually wasn't the oldest at all. HIs appearance and aptitude for gaming just made him seem like the oldest... which is a cool twist.

    This is a good prologue, for it sets up this whole group of people who should be young and he explains how they met and how they were and how they spoke, and they all seemed younger to our eyes, too.
    Then came the end and BOOM!
    They are adults.
    Genius.

    My problem with this is that... there's nothing else.
    I hope the author continues to pump these out, and maybe there's more by the time you read this, but for the moment...

    I'm waiting, having enjoyed this prologue.

    Ine Airlcana

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    Want to Meet IRL?
    Chapter:0

    Jun 30, 2020

    Oh, yeah.
    The blissful trope of 'smart-person-not-realizing-they're-in-love.'
    It's an old classic that stood firmly against the test of time, and still, it remains popular to this day.
    What a blast.

    It's a romance one-shot, so naturally, we know how this will end.
    'This was not love at first sight.'
    That is one such 'are you sure about that?' moments you won't ever forget. With the blushing and mistakes and light-headedness, this whole chapter can be summed up as the opposite of the ending line.
    'This was 100% love at first sight.'

    I like how she went from watching from a distance to eavesdropping on them to accidentally getting involved with him.
    Her inner commentary was a blast to read, too, with how she tried to find science-supported solutions and answers to the sudden changes in her body she couldn't explain.
    Love always comes like a hurricane... wasn't that how that elder lady on Hancock's island in One Piece described it?
    I guess it holds true in this case.

    While I'm talking about love, this phenomenon that is commonly called love at first sight is more akin to interest or a compatibility suspicion at first sight.
    The problem is that this doesn't roll off the tongue as well.

    She was drawn to features of this guy, Diedrich, that she recognized in other people, but never romantically.
    It can be hard to deal with those feelings if you never had the chance to indulge in them, and she seems more the logical type, with how she spends her money on her research and not on being pretty.
    I support that side of her, by the way.

    Good that she didn't ice-burn her feet, though.
    That man's a lady-killer for just picking her up in a princess carry, too!

    My scientific analysis brings me to the conclusion that this is a fine chapter!
    Continue like that! (Though it's already finished by now, lol.)

    Ine Airlcana

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    Is this Love?...Or are the Chemical Impulses Driving my Every Whim?
    Chapter:1


    Jun 29, 2020

    I'm not sure how I should feel about not knowing what most of these meant... and you said you'd add more later on?
    ... oh, my.

    My lack of insight into the mysteries of the wrestling world aside, did you talk to JJ Piedra about this?
    He's all into the wrestling thing, he would probably enjoy this story!

    Coming from the mastermind behind ParaRene, I really have to wonder how this goes.
    Since there's an explanation for the term Joshi, I can already guess how this will, very loosely speaking, go.
    Knowing the author, though... I'm in for some surprises.

    Let's go back to some more rumbling, though.
    I remember that one Spongebob episode where Spongebob and Patrick are forced to participate in a duel with two badass pros (cause Mr. Krabs wanted the price money).
    The same episode features Patrick training his ass to become hard as steel/metal, and after the pros pummel Spongebob and Patrick, play around with them, crush them into little balls and finally put them to sleep (none of that hurt these two, by the way), they set out to use their ultimate technique, which faltered against Patrick's ass.

    There's also that one South Park episode where the four boys, Kenny, Cartman, Stan, and Kyle, along with some others (don't quite remember which ones, I think Jimmy and Butters were among them) found Wrestling to be so cool that they started they joined real lessons under a wrestling coach, but he taught 'real' wrestling, not 'pro' wrestling, which emphasizes the show-aspect way more.
    Or so South Park says.
    I'm not so sure.
    Anyway, from there, I also heard something about the good guys and bad guys in the ring.

    The meet-and-greet thing I recognized from Idol anime...

    It was fun reading about the figures and techniques, but I won't comment again after the updates. I'll just read.
    Yeah, that's my extent of wrestling knowledge.

    This is only a term-explaining prologue, so I won't even waste a lot of time on this. I really wanna jump into the first chapter, so let's make that happen already!

    Ine Airlcana

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    A match made with the Rising Star
    Chapter:0

    Jun 29, 2020

    I'm glad to see that the unfortunate readers transformed back to the lovely readers, who appreciate my long comments, and stuff...
    Well, jokes aside.

    What. A. Ride.

    It's said that sexual impulses and lust are programmed into our brains and bodies so that our species can survive. It's completely natural to desire the body of the person you find yourself attracted to, the intellectual concept of 'love' included.
    I chose the thinking smiley here, although it again has no in-comment counterpart. I just chose this one: :honey_questionable:
    It's called honey questionable, but this is not questionable.
    It's tagging at my thought-strings, forcing me to think about this story and the outcome.

    Remember when I said that these sexual impulses were ingrained in us humans? As they are in all animals?
    There are some people who actually don't have that desire at all.
    It's a weird mutation of nature, one which doesn't stay a long time because it prevents them from enjoying sex, which has them probably not getting a kid or at least not as often, and as such, this mutation dies out again.
    Or something similar.
    Don't quote me on that, I'm not an expert.

    I don't think the boy is to blame.
    At that age, one can't help but be curious.
    Curiosity and desire drive humans and make them who they are. They are the reason people become who they become.

    Though I feel like I'm repeating myself.

    Dunno if I already said this, but:
    'Real-life writes the best stories.'
    I didn't come up with that, it's an old saying.
    An old saying that holds true and these kinds of stories are the things that prove this statement.

    This short story is so personal, so full of emotion, I can't help but admire it.
    If this were on Amazon, I'd probably give it 5 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
    Why?

    Because it doesn't try to answer more than it needs to.
    Because it deliberately shows only one point of view and the harshness of reality.
    Because innocence, desire, and heart-break are written in a way that makes the reader invested.
    Because we understand the characters or can see where they come from, at least.
    Because the author had the balls to publish this.

    Thanks for this delight of a story.

    Ine Airlcana

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    New Folder
    Chapter:3

    Jun 29, 2020

    '... they always thought me to be something between gay and gay.'
    Lol.

    Immediately after came this dressing-up-as-a-girl thing, and I can only say... lol.
    My school had an event like that, but everyone had to do it then.
    Boys in skirts... oh, now that I think about it, I think the whole class came in kilts once. That was funny.

    My smiley for this one was... :honey_shock:
    Actually not that one but the crying one, but yeah.
    The end hits kinda hard.

    We start kinda where the first chapter started.
    With random stories out of the author's life. Said girl-dress-up story is among them, as well as other stuff.
    It's really cool for a guy to have functioning friendships with girls, I like that.
    Some media portrays it as impossible, but I think there's a lot of merits to non-sexualized relationships.
    Sexualized relationships including romantic affection have their merits, too, of course.
    We see the latter merits in the story after the initial mumbling.

    Somewhere at the start, the protagonist was compared to a dog because of his slobbering drool.
    First of all, lol.
    I only drool when I think of that thick booty- I mean sandwich!
    I totally meant a sandwich there!
    Because I love rambling about random stuff myself, I'd like to add a commentary of some random comedian I forgot the name of.
    She talked about this stigma of men being like dogs and women being like cats and turned it around completely.
    Men are the cats, for they are emotionally unavailable, they stroll around like the kinds of the world, and other arguments.
    Women are like dogs, for they get really excited over the smallest stuff and constantly pester everyone repeatedly until they receive an answer, though, by the time they get one, they move on to the next, and stuff.
    I just wanted to add that.

    At this point, I have to address that you, my unfortunate reader, may find my comments too long, but bear with me.
    I have a lot of thoughts to put into this thing, and I love typing it out.
    You don't need to read it if you don't like it.
    Now for the next part.

    Romance ensues.
    It went how it goes, boy and girl get closer, they start craving physical contact, and lust flares up.
    The boy frequently questioned the intentions of his girlfriend, and my prediction kinda held true. It's like she was a different person... at least at times.
    For an asexual and someone who didn't want to show sexual acts like kissing to the public, she had quite the lusting side to her.
    This lack of understanding, even while trying your hardest to do so, is often found in pairs, so I understand that.

    Then they got to it, and...
    Well, maybe her lusting side is at conflict with her innocent side? Maybe she's not as innocent as she seems because she had such experiences in the past and judged them to be something she doesn't want to repeat?
    Let's see if we get any answers in the last chapter.

    Ine Airlcana

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