Aug 05, 2023
So the mystery is about Kiri's disappearance, right? Then it's solved early.
Hmm, this chap is like a filler? No twist or anything, like the therapist girl is actually real and she provoked the bully.
Stan just went home and maybe some monologue can be trimmed(?).
I was expecting someone got stabbed when Stan noticed the home empty, but yeah, that's not wholesome, lol.
Well idk, at least "adda me" is kinda impactful. The romance feels lacking(?), but there will be part 2, so I think it's alright.
And maybe no comma after ?" or ." ? I'm just not used to it. But anyway.