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Aug 09, 2023

Anyway, I won't change the scene, then.

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:20

Aug 09, 2023

To:Tomoyuki

No no, no spoilers please >.< But titles are okay!

Sweet like Honey

Chapter:5

Aug 09, 2023

To:Tomoyuki

Hold up. No, Tomo. I mean, I got scared of getting disqualified when you helped me to notice something might be a problem. Like when we talked about that BL chapter and this chapter. Which is, not a bad thing, so please keep at it, and thank you so much for your comments.

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:20

Aug 09, 2023

Jun is gonna end up with Madam Claire, or he's gonna break Claire's heart.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:14

Aug 09, 2023

To:Tomoyuki

Huh, there is a VTuber? That hooks me. Yeah, I usually got hooked by a hot character, lol. Really based.
But this book is also good. Sometimes it's sweet. And I think it's very relatable/down to earth (Yuan's mom in the case of this chapter).

Sweet like Honey

Chapter:5

Aug 09, 2023

To:Tomoyuki

Sometimes I got jumpscared by your comments, Tomo, lol. But don't worry about it, it's always helpful.

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:20

Aug 09, 2023

To:yitsuin

I was waiting for your reaction to this chapter, lol, and I became happy with your comment, so thanks.
I dunno about music, but I have the melody (incomplete) in my mind. I wish I know about music (and have some instruments to mess with), so I can make it real, lol. Yeah, so someone can do the chores and sing, "Sexy me~ Sexy me~" xD

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:16

Aug 08, 2023

It did make me chuckle, I liked it. And no, I'm not native and my grammar is not perfect.
Sorry, I was sleepy. I usually left single-line or half-assed comments when I was sleepy, because I just wanted to read the book.

My childhood friend ran away from home and now I have to share a room with her?!

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2023

To:Ducky123

Huh, why revise?
I think the gaming part is necessary because the yelling mom part won't work without it. If that stalking part makes the yelling mom part funnier, then I like it, so yeah, I agree, I think no need to elaborate on it.

My childhood friend ran away from home and now I have to share a room with her?!

Chapter:3

Aug 08, 2023

To:Ducky123

I think the story itself got more weight than the others. I read some books in the final rounds and found a few misuses of punctuation, CMIIW. So I think it's fine to finish first. Besides, others don't seem to mind it, so whichever is okay.

My childhood friend ran away from home and now I have to share a room with her?!

Chapter:1

Aug 08, 2023

Well at least Yuan didn't say something like, "I have a gf, Mom. Virtual (VTuber)." jk And at least he has a job, albeit relatively a low wage.

Sweet like Honey

Chapter:5

Aug 08, 2023

To:Tomoyuki

Yup, as a nightmare does. Let's just say Kousuke's mind is visiting a horror theme park. I also didn't go into detail about what happened to Arabella, there wasn't even blood/sauce. So I hope it's still wholesome. Wholesome dating in a horror theme park, if that makes sense, lol.

But anyway, I can also just write that she got stabbed or whatever. The point is, Kousuke must realize that he doesn't want to lose her through the trial.

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:20

Aug 08, 2023

"he wonders where she went" lol
Hmm, skull? shoe? She is a villainess?? Lol, dunno.

Our School is Perfectly Ordinary

Chapter:12

Aug 08, 2023

"graded out of thirty" lol.
Okay, Miwa is probably a mecha pilot. Oh wait, a mecha pilot doesn't have a way to erase memories, right, so maybe an alien hunter with a beam of light? lol

Our School is Perfectly Ordinary

Chapter:11

Aug 08, 2023

What do you mean hot, Halie? Lol. Anyway, "some arcs frustrating to read" is also funny, and other lines. And the last line made me, "huh?"

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:3

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