Jun 07, 2023

It was funny when his mom fainted again xD

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Jun 07, 2023

I would like to see how Ren became more sociable. I think it's kinda unfortunate it got skipped. But the ending (confession) is nice.

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Jun 07, 2023

Haru is a criminal deep inside, and he preferred to be grounded. Got it.
I love the twist (shitty gravity) btw!

Okay, I only have two chapters, so I'm gonna stop here.

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Jun 07, 2023

I second what Kitsune and Steward said. It was wonderful when I read and imagined the flying cars and everything.
So, how much do I need to pay to get into the dreamscape, that's the point, right? xD

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Jun 07, 2023

To:Fizzletrie

No problem. I think some people also use dashes, so I think I'm gonna get used to it eventually.

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Jun 07, 2023

His mother wings him very hard. But Tetsudo is an innocent boy.

Okay, I only have two chapters, so I'm gonna stop here. Your synopsis is intriguing, btw.

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Jun 07, 2023

I'm not bored reading about Tetsudo walked around, I got immersed. That's good. The ending is also hooking.

Yeah, there are walls of text, but I got used to it and also got immersed anyway. So, it's fine, I guess. I'm a little bit confused about the dash, but no problem.

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Jun 07, 2023

It's Joe B*den High School, isn't it?

But seriously, I love the way Kaiden describes Astella. Madly in love.

Btw, is the teacher hot?

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Jun 07, 2023

So he's gonna be toyed around. "I miss when you toyed me around".
"Oh, Jason~"
<3

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Jun 07, 2023

Oh crap, I read that as "What about Violin". Lol I'm sleepy

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Jun 07, 2023

What about Harmonica?

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Jun 07, 2023

So she was on top, and he was bottom (and threatened). Kinda romantic.

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Jun 06, 2023

Tornado Slash is everywhere! xD (Laplce M and RO Orign have it, iirc) "For only $50" is also funny. It's relatable.
Anyway, "Girl who loves killing meets boy who can't be killed" in self-promo got me interested.

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Apr 12, 2023

Is this dystopia? Everything is a theme park! But that's an interesting concept.

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Apr 10, 2023

To:Steward McOy

O ho, so it was complicated.
I'm gonna interpret it that way, then.

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