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Aug 29, 2023

Now Stan becomes delusional again, lmao
Anyway, I think it's intriguing because I'm not sure how this is gonna be resolved. Maybe he will try to show he can make Kiri curious? Well, I dunno. /just theorizing

Escapism

Chapter:25

Aug 29, 2023

Real daddy issue.

Hmm, why dq? I checked the eligibility checklist, and I think this novel seems eligible for the judging/ranking process.
Fighting is fine, I think, it's just one chapter. Because sparse sad moments are fine, iirc, so sparse drama I think it's fine. Maybe just make sure they kiss and kiss in the next chapter, lmao

Or will Stan not be together in the end? (bad end)

Escapism

Chapter:24

Aug 29, 2023

Hmmmm, the contamination thing, and even the apocalypse, was the council doing, so people would depend on them. If that's the case, then it's kakkoii, and even if it's not, I'm still curious about their purpose in detaining anybody as they wish.

Sorry for the double comments, I forgot to comment that the beginning part was funny, I also enjoyed it.

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:16

Aug 28, 2023

I think this is a romance story. Orion doesn't pursue to be the strongest martial artist. It's just about Halie.

And it's not about playing chess or something. Chu chu can come later as in isekai romance manhwa and real life. And I think only one or two isekai romance manhwa that brings the chu chu/"they become a couple" that fast (and it was boring, lol, for me)

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:13

Aug 28, 2023

The beginning part made me think, Haru becomes crazy, lol

Hmm, do people become delusional after a great trauma or something? I watched a movie that used it as a twist (the MC was actually a patient, a crazy person) Thus, since Haru finds happiness, Grace dies.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:32

Aug 28, 2023

"I don't wanna fly alone"
For me, that's beautiful one.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:31

Aug 28, 2023

Hmm, isn't it dangerous for Dr. Fuchisia? So yes, she is cool. And I think she can play dumb, "I never thought Orion would rescue that girl. Don't you think so?"
Anyway, it's exciting to know what happens next. And hmm, I hope he gets a kiss.

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:15

Aug 28, 2023

Orion said, "And then excuse yourself" lmao.
".Turn a little to ..." This is a nitpick, my OCD thinks it should have had a space between the period and "Turn". xD

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:14

Aug 28, 2023

Huh? It's that the Entity's personal voice (the bolded text)? Or maybe Orion's. It was a chaotic situation, so this question is also another good thing and makes me curious about the next chapter.
Don't tell me Halie becomes a monster or something, and the actual FMC is the Entity or Dr. Fuchisia. So, "This is just the prologue."
Anyway, I liked that the Entity actually sees Orion as that Orion, it was surprising.

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:13

Aug 27, 2023

Now Orion becomes active!! Bad boy energy!! Kabedon!

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:12

Aug 27, 2023

But I think this chapter is a breath of fresh air, it's not holding hands but it's brushing hair and kinda romantic.
Anyway, go go go, 4K left! You can do this, yitsuin!! Just do it!!

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:11

Aug 27, 2023

Yeah, seems Orion is always passive---he didn't try to raise her affection levels intentionally. He should have said, "B*tch, that's too long" or something, Halie wouldn't mind it anyway.

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:11

Aug 27, 2023

The narrative technique in the beginning was interesting.
Orion may avert the bad end by making Halie happy, but why does Halie try to stick to the plot? Why bother finding her brother, when she can just date Orion? Wait a minute, she has Entity too?
Is what I wonder. /just theorizing
Or she just wants to play around.

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:10

Aug 27, 2023

This chapter is actually about the clay tablet system, lol.
Anyway, Halie didn't seem interested in Orion's 3D CGs yet.

A Study on the Stand-In Love Interest

Chapter:9

Aug 26, 2023

I consent to Yukimura's slams. And Karou was definitely cheating on his election.

Tomorrow is Closed

Chapter:2

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