Aug 18, 2023
I think it was a bit chunky paragraph when Soldier talked about the strongest force. But no matter. And yeah, runs on love? What a bullsht, lol, but at the same time, I think it's a kinda unique setting.
And that buster beam was fking satisfying, lmao. It was surprising and good. Perfect to end Soldier.
Also, the "I was right to not go back ..." part sounded romantic to me.
Congratulation on finishing. Sometimes, I just felt like reading your book. Maybe because of your fairytale-like prose, maybe because of your short chapters. I dunno. But since it kept me coming back without feeling pressured, then it has a mysterious charm.
(Sorry for the double comments, I think I need to remove one letter, lmao. Yeah, sorry for my OCD, I also don't like it)