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I just love writing. Is it any good? No idea! But it brings me joy, and that's what matters to me.
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Oct 08, 2025
To:Mai
Fear and trust are very different, lol. Don’t fear her, but it’s also wise never to fully trust her!
Phyllis can be a hoot and a holler.
Thank you so much Mai! I hope you enjoy the story!
Oct 07, 2025
I love the tension you’re building between the characters. Those similarities that they both want to accept but also reject. It’s absolutely wonderful!
To:Mara
Well I’ve only just begun but it is in my humble opinion that you’re amazing at this type of storytelling. As a big fan of scifi you have definitely captured my attention!
The imagery in this chapter is absolutely stunning! The descriptions alone really sell the mood and much like your sunfic, I can sense that feeling of loss and struggle. I feel like scifi is something that you’re passionate with.
Really looking forward to reading more. 5/5
Oct 06, 2025
I love the imagery you add into your story and the flow of conversation is very smooth. Not to mention the subtle humour with things like “depressed shellfish” really got me laughing.
Can’t wait to read more!
Oct 04, 2025
It's got WHEELS. It's got a GOOSE. There are BALLS. Looking forward to this story.
Thank you for saying so. I was nervous about the traumas I chose for this story, and that they wouldn't show enough of his original world struggle. I wanted to really tie in the things he'd experienced and bring them into the isekai'd realm. I also wanted to show that not all traumas are physical, but some are psychological and emotional as well.
Oct 03, 2025
100% a thought! Phyllis did say that Ishara would not have lived past 5 years, so by giving him life beyond it, how much would the snowball of existence change the story of the world?
Oct 02, 2025
Thank you so much. It was a real challenge to decide what was and wasn't necessary to tell. Writing a tale of an author who knows what is set to happen in his own story and thus the story of the world, it became difficult to determine what should be told to the reader. I found it to be a fine line between the MC being honest and withholding information from the reader for suspense and tension.
You have discovered the secret ace in my hand, the white haired twink trope!
Thank you for your comment. I was hoping in the early chapters to give the feel that Tahvin’s life had been far from perfect. The dream sequences continue to expand on that as the story continues but I do begin to lace in more comedy and fantasy of the new world.
Thank you for your continued support ❤️ ❤️❤️
Sep 30, 2025
Thank you so much! I wasn't sure if people would find my humour funny, so I skipped the comedy tag. I'm happy you found some humour in it!
I really wanted to have a little more 'mature' character with some life experience to draw on. Since I wanted this story to be about healing, I found adding a few extra years gave him a different perspective on the world and a unique take on what is and isn't important. I hope you enjoy the twists and turns of the following chapters and how I handle this.