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I just love writing. Is it any good? No idea! But it brings me joy, and that's what matters to me.
What is an Achievement?
Oct 14, 2025
To:Steward McOy
Haha, not to mention a magical one!
Real boomer capitalism vibes. Trying to keep up with the youths and their “me-mes”
Very nice! I like the attention to detail with the jargon and how you handled space walks. And it’s always a plus to see the Canadarm(2) mentioned! Looking forward to reading more.
Oct 12, 2025
To:Mai
Phyllis is the RO’s little horny chaos gremlin. She is and will always be my favourite. Just don’t tell the other characters.
Thank you so much! Before this story I always received feedback that I gave too much detail (the whole cake and not just a slice) so when I wrote the RO I tried to pull back on it. Though, I fear I pulled a bit too far back. When I’m able to, I will use this chapter as an example of how to enhance other chapters.
Whhhaaaaaat?! Ishara-bros?!
Oct 11, 2025
To:Mara
Haha, yeah. He really drew the short straw on his role!
Oct 08, 2025
I'm really glad to hear that! I know it took a while to get the whole gang together, but they're in it to win it now. I'm crossing my fingers you like the four of them together!
100% an Aesandoral gal! Mmmhmmm!
I'd be worried you'd get some strange looks! But maybe you have some magic that I don't know about? 😜
I like to think we've all got some of that hidden away, lol!
You would think he would know better!
Bahaha, oh Mai! You’ve got so much game that your playthrough is far from over!
Thank you so much for this feedback! I agree that the ranking system needs some more work to help it flow better (another new thing I was trying). Once the competition is over I will be sure revisit this section and tighten it up!
I hope I can impress you! The introspection aspect was new for me in this story and I hope my method of blending memories from Earth (past) with the isekai realm of Esseria (present) flows well.