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T.Goose

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I just love writing. Is it any good? No idea! But it brings me joy, and that's what matters to me.

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Oct 23, 2025

To:Steward McOy

Well I’m looking to add some more humorous inner monologue so I’m going to be stealing this for the edit “yyyyooooiiinnnnkkkkk”

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:28

Oct 22, 2025

To:AmberDrip

These are great points. I shall add them to my collection of notes! You’re right that I can add some humour to the beginning of the gym portion. Give it some “big summer blowout” energy.

More comedy! Can do will do!

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:7

Oct 22, 2025

Really great chapter. Love the build up of suspense that happens towards the end. The moment between Hina and Maeko in the beginning was really nice and built a little more connection between the two.

It feels like a shift is coming. Like the rain is beginning to fall before the storm really opens up. Looking forward to more.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:14

Oct 22, 2025

To:Steward McOy

Shhh he’s trying to be respectable or at the very least, within contractual boundaries.

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:24

Oct 22, 2025

That title has popped up again, “mahou shoujo” but now describing Erika. I’m beginning to believe it means a magic user by the argument that followed it.

I really like that you described magic as not simply this be all end all thing and that it is nothing more than energy with limits! Very nice addition!

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:13

Oct 21, 2025

I enjoyed your presentation of a potentially taboo subject. Very well done. It’s interesting to see more lore being dropped about gynoids and their lives/wants/and needs.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:12

Oct 21, 2025

I believe this is the first time it has been mentioned that Erika has magic. It’s interesting to see the plot thickening.

I still find the way human touch reacts with gynoid skin very interesting.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:11

Oct 21, 2025

Interesting chapter. It’s intriguing to see Maeko displaying very human emotions and concepts which is revealed to be odd. It makes me wonder how serious she was with her “question” to Erika and how far she’d be willing to go in reality.

As for the topic of the war, it’s been mentioned a few times that Soviets and Muricans had lost their ability for space flight. It makes me wonder how back this centuries along war was and how it could have been possible to lose that information. Was it forcibly removed or was it a part of the peace treaty? Would be interested to know and hope to have it revealed.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:10

Oct 20, 2025

To:AmberDrip

Oooh, a body break reference would add to the 90s jokes. I'll be sure to keep that one in mind for the revisions.

That is a great point, I probably could adjust the way I described that and make it a bit more neutral of a statement. Thanks for the recommendation, and I will definitely review and adjust my word choices in this chapter.

Hahaha, well, let me see if I can ship a devil capybara your way!

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:6

Oct 20, 2025

To:AmberDrip

Bahaha, it may as well be! I should probably add more cacti and rock gardens to the main campus.

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:5

Oct 20, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

You know I thought about it, lol. But who doesn’t love a good truck-kun moment…especially when the protagonist is minding their own business.

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:0

Oct 20, 2025

To:Mai

Unfiltered Phyllis would be Honeyboard gold!

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:32

Oct 19, 2025

To:Steward McOy

Yeah, the overly complex name and randomness in the consequences were another one of either the world’s creations meant to fill in blanks or another version of Tahvin doing so. At this point it is not known which it could be.

These random creations and changes are meant to be the challenges he faces in this world. I figured having a character who knew everything would get boring (and go directly against the isekai theme of the reader discovering the world alongside the character), thus knowing 95% and then being confused and surprised by the other 5% would add that bit of humour and/or suspense depending on the situation.

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:19

Oct 19, 2025

To:Steward McOy

Please feel free to provide as much feedback as you feel comfortable. I appreciate people’s opinions and views as it’ll help me grow as a writer.

On the topic of word choice, I can definitely see your point and there are some things I can tighten up here. I often steer clear of overly complex descriptors (as part of my own preference) but I can see how this description may turn a head or two in the wrong direction, lol. During my next edit phase I’ll have to determine if I am aiming for this moment to be more comedy (and amp up that virginal nose bit) or seriousness (and adjust to be more descriptive). Again, thank you for your feedback on this!

The Ruby Oracle

Chapter:17

Oct 18, 2025

QUACK...
I mean...
HONK!

Glad to see the wheel return and that Gilbert is up to his shenanigans!

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:2

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