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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

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Aug 06, 2020

This chapter was... interesting in many ways. Everyone lives inside the tress, women are holy and revered, however it seems that what they are telling is not even the surface of how deep this rabbit hole might go. I'll gladly jump into it to see how everything turns out.

Short & Short

Chapter:2

Aug 06, 2020

This episode was way better formatted and executed in regards to punctuation, congrats! For a second there I was afraid Ziggy wouldn't have enough time to explain things properly but thankfully Sabrina did listen in the end. It appears the Chronos Chamber is something to be fearful of due to how it blends time and space.

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:2

Aug 06, 2020

I am thinking emoji right now with this rouge knight we found, especially during his outburst. Most definitely that's who Liena is looking for but, for what purpose? For the things, he said he did during his small confession with Sam? I guess that for now, we won't know.

I'm finding all of this intriguing. I'll be back tomorrow to keep on reading!

A Battlefield of Swords and Flowers

Chapter:3

Aug 06, 2020

As always, a delight to read your updates. I was so excited when I saw it in the server.

Alrighty, so it seems this arc starts with a lot of foreshadowing about their parents and a possible issue with Futaba's and Ryuuji's relationship. We also get to know the principal, Daigo, and how much he loves them both as his own sons. We can see why as well since his daughter has been in Europe for a long time, so both brothers were the nearest thing to family for him.

In regards to Hinata, I still can't say much about her, except for being the childhood friend Ryouta seemed to have forgotten and I'm glad he remembered instantly instead of dragging that issue for a long time!

I'll be waiting for the next update, keep it up QI!

Will The Stars Remember My Name?

Chapter:18

Aug 05, 2020

To:Ehanso

Thank you for taking your time for reading and giving my story a chance, I promise it won't dissapoint!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:0

Aug 04, 2020

I see so this seems to be a reverse Isekai and I'm a sucker for those, haha.

Ceatha has a lot of personality and it makes it even more interesting for me! The way she ended on "this" world was surprising since it was due to her own attack. However, given it's a Black Hole... anything can happen!

This Elf Became a Trucker to Return to her World

Chapter:0

Aug 04, 2020

This short story caught my attention because it's complete, and I'm pretty sure I'll catch up to it tomorrow but at the moment your writing made me remember some sort of diary. As if the girl is pouring all of her feelings on it, instead of being a narration of her feelings. I don't know if I'm making any sense at all but, I like the format you're using! It's different and refreshing!

About You

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2020

Alrighty, here I am! I got a bit lost while reading it due to the formatting (especially the lack of proper command and punctuations), however, the message got through and I find the concept interesting. It's always nice seeing how others create their worlds and give them shape.

I'll look forward to reading the next chapters!

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2020

This is really nice so far. At first, I thought that Edelgard could be aDryad due to how she felt connected with the tree she found herself with.

Another thing I found interesting is the fact that three types or phases of the moon exist in this world.

I have around three theories about Edelgard. She is either a Dryad who has just been born from that tree, hence why she knows nothing about the world, She is a Hamadryad which are the ones that die if their tree is destroyed, so maybe something happened to her tree that caused her amnesia. The third one is that she has awoken from some sort of another world and is a human as well.

I'll keep on reading to see where all of this leads to!

Short & Short

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2020

I'm pretty sure Lady Liena is searching for the figure Sam saw. I was so excited to see her and Lia interacting because for Lia she is her role model, and to discover they share so many things in common must've generated in her so many nice feelings inside and aspired her to become a better healer.

I'm also enjoying the fact that even if this is told by Sam's perspective, we readers get tons of focus towards Lia and the bond they share, as well as how Sam perceives the way Lia and Liena interact.

Your writing indeed is lovely, and I felt like taking a stroll myself too around the town. The way the hierarchy worked, such as having ministers, and chiefs and such shows your dedication into applying lore into your worldbuilding.

The small segment about Liena's reason as of why she only knows healing magic was nice too!

Keep it up! I'll catch up in no time!

A Battlefield of Swords and Flowers

Chapter:2

Aug 04, 2020

I'm glad Akio's true identity was revealed! Haru can now feel more comfortable around her group of friends instead of pretending all the time. I love how you drop the relationships between the colourful cast of characters. It seems that family problems are a common factor as well and I truly hope that the power of friendship breaks through!

I'm still VERY intrigued with Tomoki and Tomoko, especially now that we got the other twin's input to this family dilemma they have and the way he thinks about it and Tomoki.

I'm glad I'm up to date now, so it's time to wait for that lovely "To Be Continued" button to become yellow.

The Talents of Kaino High

Chapter:6

Aug 04, 2020

Oh, it seems our protagonist had a nightmare about his sister. I'm truly intrigued to see how their relationship is/used to be given how much it affects him up until this day.

Another thing that caught me by surprise was the change of narrator, it was suddenly Tomoki and I wonder why was that. We got some family input as well from her, now the reason as of why they have different surnames makes sense. At first, I thought it was a typo due to how similar they were as well. I'm glad they got to reunite, however seeing how buddy-buddy they were at the start of the story, it makes me wonder if Tomoko is pushing it to make his sister less uncomfortable or if he is pushing himself over the limit due to being reunited. I'm very curious about them now.

The Talents of Kaino High

Chapter:5

Aug 03, 2020

The way you manage to join slice-of-life with what seems to be adventure/sci-fi is really good. I'm hoping the labyrinth plan goes smoothly!

I'll be back soon to keep on reading! I'm super to close to catch up!

The Talents of Kaino High

Chapter:4

Aug 03, 2020

I feel very bad for Katsu, especially his broken relationship with his siters ow explains so many things from his personality and actions from before. I hope he manages to join them in their study sessions before it's too late and they stop inviting him anymore, he would feel even lonlier and hate them more than he already does.

The mechanic of the labyrinth seems interesting, plus it's always nice to see how this actual experiment will work in this environment full of top students.

I'll make sure to catch up in no time!

The Talents of Kaino High

Chapter:3

Aug 03, 2020

The school lore is very interesting so far, I'm enjoying this mix between sci-fi and slice-of-life mixed with survival. It seems you've fleshed out all of this properly given all the explanations. Eagerly awating to read about the next examination.

The Talents of Kaino High

Chapter:2

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