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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

registered at: Jul 27, 2020

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Aug 13, 2020

It was relaxing to sit with them, I actually felt like drinking tea as well. I can see Martha is a rather developed character already, loved her characterization.

The Devil's Tears

Chapter:6

Aug 13, 2020

Glad this chapter had a happy ending for the girl, at least. I felt horrible while that scene happened to her. Justice was served. Funny how you managed to break the whole atmosphere with a simple joke as well, helped to tone it down!

Otherworld Isekai Service

Chapter:4

Aug 13, 2020

Oh my, that was an interesting twist. Moe actually saved our protagonist from suffering her same fate after seeing the ghost. I feel really sad about her. It seems to me that Moe has this role now of protecting possible victims from suffering her same fate from her mother's restless spirit. As your tittle of the collection suggests, she was an echo of the past in order to stop similar incidents.

The first indication that gave me the feeling Moe was a supernatural being was the scene of the light, and then everything went down. However, I hadn't expected for her to die in such gruesome way.

Whispering: Echoes

Chapter:2

Aug 12, 2020

To:kazesenken

No worries, that tends to happen a lot! I'll make sure to check out your other story once I'm done with this one!

Otherworld Isekai Service

Chapter:3

Aug 12, 2020

Aw, this truly touched my heartstrings due to how technology has advanced and personifying these objects while giving them unique personalities really made this one-shot touch my soul. Another thing I loved was the second person narration, that's a tricky thing to do and here was great!

ONE SHOT

Chapter:4

Aug 12, 2020

Things keep on getting good and that finale, haha. What a severe punishment.

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:8

Aug 12, 2020

The guards do get on my nerves with that holier than thou attitude, which in turn means you've done a splendid job in characterization!

The Devil's Tears

Chapter:5

Aug 12, 2020

Oh, I smell a plot twist in the next chapter, exciting!

One thing I noticed though, was that in some parts of the chapter, the dialogue changed to the first person with "I" just to in the same sentence mention Diesel. I thought this was told from a third-person perspective/omnipresent narrator, but perhaps I must've not noticed on previous chapters that this happened and is told from a higher-up being instead of third-person Diesel.

Otherworld Isekai Service

Chapter:3

Aug 12, 2020

As expected this was really good executed. At first, I truly thought Ryuusei had made a pact with something/someone and that's why he was acting the way he did because he didn't want those disappearances to happen but so they did. The breaking point was when he pierced himself with the needle and made no sound. That made me theorize he no longer was Ryuusei. And at the end, we see that he was sewn on the ceiling, mouth and eyes. Sounds like a warning/threat from the supernatural being for perhaps him breaking a rule from their pact which is why the other bodies appeared as well. Perhaps he found out? I'm just making stuff in my head due to how well your writing was, the suspense it's so good it makes me act that way, haha.

Whispering: Echoes

Chapter:1

Aug 12, 2020

To:Anonymous Buttfart

Ah, gotcha!

The Devil's Tears

Chapter:4

Aug 11, 2020

To:Kino

Oh, that's exciting to know. Seeing how you've fleshed them out here I'm eager to know what else will happen!

Between Life and Death

Chapter:0

Aug 11, 2020

To:Kino

Don't worry, the story won't go anywhere! I'm glad the end came as a surprise, I thought it was predictable but I'm good I manage to deliver the impact I wanted to convey!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:1

Aug 11, 2020

This was such a nice introduction to the new volume. I'm glad Sam's and Lia's relationship stayed the same, and I could feel myself relaxing in the flower fields as well. I'm super excited to see what is going to happen next!

A Battlefield of Swords and Flowers

Chapter:7

Aug 11, 2020

This new chapter was great as always, glad to see her side of the story once again! I find it amusing how the concept of actual GB is explored in her world, giving her more of a specialist mathematician, intellectual air rather than just some who uses magic. As well, her intelligence seems off the roof with all the things she has invented and developed, and how fast she is trying to adapt for her survival.

This Elf Became a Trucker to Return to her World

Chapter:6

Aug 11, 2020

Your improvement keeps on getting better, especially when detailing action scenes! Things keep getting more exciting and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:7

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