Aug 07, 2020
This chapter had a lot of development, honestly! When I saw the update I was so excited.
So about Gin and the whole mess that happened at the start, it's understandable for him to lose his sanity given his current state, the way he rediscovers himself in negativity just to bring out the positivity himself by only pure sheer will.
I can notice your effort and dedication throughout the whole chapter, making it an emotional and amusing rollercoaster of emotions. The way his inner self reminds him there are people waiting for him, that he has a place to return to called home. That he isn't a failure in the human world, that his feelings can come back and he starts missing them, he is more human than what he actually thought he was in the first place.
A very heavy chapter, leaving us readers with a nice finale, him finally acknowledging he has a "home".
Keep it up!
