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Jun 17, 2025

Hwat.

Professional Development

Chapter:3

Jun 17, 2025

This one is also a little strange, if I'm being honest. I get the idea here isn't to have a coherent, conventional narrative - this is likely to be a vignette. But structurally, it feels like we've stagnated for 2 chapters, and the third is likely going to crescendo us into a conclusion. Hopefully that will work out.

Professional Development

Chapter:2

Jun 17, 2025

Lost the sauce there, a little. I feel like the surrealist aspects are a bit at odds with the horrific aspects. I can imagine this as a dark comedy, but a lot of this reads like a heterogenous blend - like oil and water, humour and horror don't mix all that well.

Professional Development

Chapter:1

Jun 16, 2025

Okay, this is the first time the lesbian couple actually comes together. Neat.

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:18

Jun 16, 2025

I want them to kiss.

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:17

Jun 14, 2025

Lavenza reminds me of Jordan Peterson if for no other reason that whatever she says, however mundane, brims with an almost undue intensity.

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:10

Jun 14, 2025

The Age of Magic... again with Frieren...

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:8

Jun 14, 2025

I like the juxtaposition of the two magic 'styles', if you could call them that. The archmage and his disciples command, and the universe bends to their will - reminds me a lot of The Voice from Dune. Whilst Lavenza always seems to request or plead that her will be done, and the universe responds. Very clever.

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:6

Jun 14, 2025

Is Ariadne a reference to the myth of Theseus :D

Also I didn't know fantasy world had canned beans...

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:4

Jun 14, 2025

Why do all these spells remind me of something I'd seen in a game or cartoon once...

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:3

Jun 14, 2025

Frieren travelling with a snarky Fern and casting foreign spells, yeah this is peak

Travelogue of an Apostate

Chapter:2

Jun 11, 2025

To:haru

Stop the simping! Nyeh.

One Last Message

Chapter:2

Jun 11, 2025

Good girl, Haru. Good anime.

One Last Message

Chapter:2

Jun 11, 2025

To:haunted-cassette

No worries, always happy to help. Don't worry about the reread. You should extend that favour to people who aren't paid to moderate the site 😉

Best of luck and spam me when you rewrite, I WANT THAT COTTAGECORE LESBIAN VIBES

Let's Make It Count...

Chapter:30

Jun 11, 2025

To:haunted-cassette

As a fellow yuri writer and liver, I welcome the yuri. Please yuri next time, Asuka has SO many potential crushes, all doomed yuri...

Let's Make It Count...

Chapter:29

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