Feb 16, 2025
Banger start. Read like a DnD campaign that my drunk friend, who's also a habitual speed enjoyer would cook up. Of course, his name is Walter White and his job is being a chemistry teacher, when he's not too busy being bald in the desert. Or is it dessert? Paronyms.
Speaking of dessert, what a delicious little piece of cake. I love how you manage to compress a large amount of information in very little writing, with such naturalesse (naturalcy?) that it simply glides off. Doesn't even register as exposition or a segue, it's merely there, organically embedded like one of those overfancy fish skin grafts. As for personality, of course, we don't get to see much of it, but Reem is just what the princess in Shrek should've been. A quirked up gringa, instead of a green muscle mommy hiding in a cute gown. How the fuck did that thing stay on during the ogrification? Transmogrifiers aren't what they used to be, ugh. Anyway, I am off my case and off this case, so I'll stop now.
Good shit.
Signed,
bbbluse
