Aug 08, 2023
This is pretty nifty. Gap moe on the little demon girl who's going to steal our teenage themby's heart.
Whilst the atmospheres are beautifully set, I can't help feeling that sometimes the manner in which they're laid down is a bit monotonous or jarring. I think interrupting dialogue with dynamic description is an interesting stylistic choice, but in a sea of other similar descriptions it doesn't create as strong an effect. However, I did enjoy the repetition of gold, I think it was a pretty banging epiphora.
Very cool Ana, much love. Sahuja fwiiiii.