Rex

Rex

It's fun to write.
The covers are a pain to make though.

My comments tend to get harsh & heated sometimes when talking about certain points in stories. I apologise in advance as I mean nothing bad by it to you personally, just me beefing with whatever part of the story I'm in at the time.

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    Sep 27, 2026

    We've only been hearing sounds, seems the glimpses have begun.

    I wonder why she's fading between the realities. I guess because regardless, going back means going back to the exact moment, and since she's close enough to the going away portal thing both times have synced?

    So that's his name, cool.

    Still no explanation for the pall though, since it seemed like the duchess didn't know it. How weird.

    Rough road? how? surely we're in a city and i assume not in the outskirts, that doesn't seem right. unless there's tons of pot holes.

    "to hide her emotion" huh? what emotion? is it that crazy he's giving the stylus? that felt forced idk. Maybe tears of joy for him finally going or something.

    Brought back to exactly where we left off, seems about right, how's a clock indicating month and day though?

    I do guess Stylus is not in his correct time though. That he was brought to the same time as her thanks to the thing before. I wonder when he really came from, or where for that matter. I guess the alternative is he was and that was like 10-15 years ago and he waited for this moment, though he'd have to find her and know when exactly, so definitely not that and more that it's the first thing.

    It finally ends, This ending I'd say was nice, thanks to clara the past stuff was annoying and bad at times, honestly I could have easily seen her replaced with Clayton instead, like he stayed and clara left way back at the gate house. But thankfully there wasn't much clara at all this chapter so it was good.

    Interesting start, nice ending, but the middle to just now was annoying very often, mostly thanks to clara. What a shame, but at least this ending bit, I repeat myself but I often do that, was indeed nice.

    The only other thing I'd note is the very last sentence. It seems... sudden. As in it could have used something like "she paused and looked up at him. Then a moment later she burst into tears of joy" idk something like that. I could mention some more to it, but that's enough of a suggestion I'd say, not that it matters now anyway.

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    The Stylus is Mightier Than the Sword?!
    Chapter:44






    Sep 27, 2026

    I'd describe this chapter as a plot hole. I thought the previous chapter was a fumble even worse than the one before that, this one is a fumble too but in a different way. But I'll get to that at the end.

    "you tell her now" bitch must think she's in control or something, she's lucky she got to live tbh.

    "sounds like something you would do" Is she this mentally damaged? The only thing she's been doing is trying to take it out via summons. Apparently the only one fucking interested in keeping her planet alive unlike clara who actively wants everyone to fucking die.

    She herself was summoned here? Ok, that is very surprising. and since she's using Iran she must be from at least around 1935 maximum I guess?

    wonder what this city was.

    Ok I guess she randomly decided to tell her anyway? weird. And also how does the know specifically what to do? Has there been success stories she's witnessed?

    Please kill off clara holy shit, every damn time she speaks. fucking hell she's massively annoying.

    did she realise that she somehow (absolute plot convenience) got tricked by clara and anna to speak? that's the only way, dunno why she suddenly acting like this.

    ????? Why would dilara ever save clara? what the fuck? did she suddenly get replaced? absolutely this is plot armor, holy shit this was bad. It makes no sense in the fucking slightest. So the whole reason clara was here was for pure plot convenience. What kind of BS is this.

    so she asked anna for the stylus... Instead of getting up? and she didn't try to reach for any quills, just got the stylus?
    This same duchess that is out of character for absolutely no reason saving clara is not getting up for some reason, and being handed the stylus instead of anna searching for the quill.
    Simply a plot hole.

    This was just a fumble, I don't know what else to say.

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    The Stylus is Mightier Than the Sword?!
    Chapter:39



    Sep 26, 2026

    I arrive here today and see that it's finished, I guess you had forgotten to mark it finished before? which led me to have the wrong idea.

    So THIS was the final chapter? The way it ends, is by bringing HER into the party?
    I guess now I kinda understand why there was literally no time at all before punishment and the "she's good now, trust" fully into the party thing, you had no more chapters to insert between that which made it be the rushed deal that it is. ( I wonder if inserting it at the start of volume 2 would have been better or if it would have started terribly because of said news. Who knows.)

    Well, looking at it from a last chapter lens (from what I remember, not rereading), it's, well... It is what it is I guess. Trying to think of if I have anything else to say but I don't think so. I think what I've already said with the discrepancies(?) with where the elves are living and all that still holds. And obviously ending with the way it did was what it was.

    I guess if I had to note something it'd be the why tf is waki holding our shoulder for so long. I could see her placing it at the start but letting it stay there the whole time at the end felt weird. Some because fuck her obviously and she's been ruined again, or she ruined the chapter again, but also because it feels out of character. I don't see her as someone that'd just keep her hand on someone's shoulder. She feels more "hit and run" if that makes sense. A quick flirt or move or whatever before continuing with something else or talking about something else. The hit and run being the flirt, or the move or touch or whatever.

    What a journey this has been. The middle was awful, the rebel shenanigans helped move a lot of the heat away from waki (as well as too much time passed so by that point I just stopped caring) and were interesting. The ending was what it was... I'd rather not really think about this ending to be honest. Heck I almost want to consider the previous chapter as the real last chapter and ignore this one but that doesn't solve or help anything.

    The question is if the rebel shenanigans were interesting enough to give it a this was good/alright mark. because the middle I didn't like, and the ending was, well I'll try not to repeat myself so much.

    Ceara's character IS interesting... There's potential in her and the rebels too.
    Yeah I'll say this was nice. I usually tend to tilt towards positive anyway. At the very least, definitely be proud you completed a story (or another story depending on if you have done so before or not, regardless be proud).

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    The Heretic Red Mage
    Chapter:38



    Sep 25, 2026

    It still makes no sense, that honestly is a HUGE stain on this part, why the fuck is them staying with families in their houses allowed but staying in UNUSED GROUND not? That is absolute BS. They should be in the unused ground, if the elders want to cry about that, they can do something about it themselves, when some start returning in bodybags that should clear the picture, like seriously. So dumb, it absolutely should not happen. I'm just gonna pretend they're using the ground, otherwise it will be so incredibly stupid, borderline a plot hole honestly.

    And now they're across the river? ...Which would be unused ground? What the fuck? I don't even know, that whole thing is a big L.

    "several centuries of avoiding human trade" they didn't? That's how this mess got started in the first place, with them having gotten jumped AFTER trading a bit with humans. Did that just get ret conned? or did you forget?

    "known what SHE planned" I honestly highly doubt she planned that alone. Heck that guy that gave the idea of lashing Uriel needs to get got too, fuck him.
    Which speaking of, since oracle is less a leadership role (or unique for that matter given there's multiple) I don't much see a point in stripping it. I guess that's the problem with a tribe that has multiple leader style roles and multiple people in those roles.

    the "what did they decide" I thought was coming from nimiwa because it said she stood next to us, that was a bit confusing but quickly I realized it was uriel.
    Uhhh, yeah I feel nothing, too late for it to matter to be honest. It may as well never have happened and it'd be the same at this point, far far too late. On the other hand, I guess that's a proper(?) punishment maybe? Dunno. Can't tell because I feel nothing of it. Usually what happens when it takes 10 years to punish something, it starts to not matter as caring about it becomes irrelevant.

    Was nothing covering her boobs? since both arms were on the stump none were covering them. That's not good.

    "centuries of warnings" what? was it always centuries? That doesn't feel right, but obviously they did that themselves when they started trading with them so at this point whatever.

    Stockholm syndrome hit him hard enough to avert eyes on the third? I guess it took too long for him to care too, even if part of the length taken was his fault.

    Why? Just why? we have to still have to deal with waki? Maybe I'm not as interested in a next volume after all... So she's gonna be annoying there too. Great. Awesome. Definitely.

    "human gods would kill us" Hmmmm, more towards the theory of them being evil, curious.

    We STILL don't get to know what she said to her? this is insane. They call back to it, and just as she's about to say it, she's stopped. WHY BOTHER SAYING IT THEN? at that point remove the whole thing, I'd rather it not be said completely then be like "this is what I said" then followed by nothing. Are you kidding me? OF COURSE waki would be this fucking annoying, just as we're about to find out what it was, and SHE'S STAYING? nah that's dumb. What next? we taking the church in too? May as well, at least they'll be consistently annoying and villainous and never hinted otherwise that they might not. I can only hope she's pranking, all just a sick joke.
    Surprisingly agile for someone lashed so much too, you'd think she wouldn't be able to clasp ANYTHING, but no, of fucking course, as if by sheer plot armor/convenience she was allowed to quickly stop her from saying whatever it was she was going to say.

    "learn from her" learn what? how to put a dagger up your ass?

    So pointless. Learn south? we already got nimiwa. Learn north? pointless, what's there to learn? We already got the blessing, and knowing how to fish or build a house is not necessary.

    He picked up a goddess and put her in his lap? This feels way out of character, they been together a while, but nowhere near enough for him to dare do something like that to a goddess. Idk about this.

    "that more than suited me" more like that more than sucked. Yeah that's awful.

    First though "where one settlement ended and the other began" so they're not living in someone else's houses? but are in unused ground? yeah idk, like i said, that whole thing is an L, it should have been the unused ground.

    Finally... Idk. first half was cool I guess? I honestly can't tell because the news of waki staying was so utterly tiring i forgot the rest, I literally forgot what happened, the only thing I thought was "Ugh, more of this shit again." So yeah, the whole chapter is a fumble, and absolutely completely ruined just from that line, at least for me.

    It doesn't matter if she got punished, or has been and will be for however long, because it's too late, her annoyance is now permanent, had you punished her earlier I'd MAYBE have a different outlook, but you didn't and she wasn't. Which lead to her punishment basically being non existent feelings wise, because literally it could have never have happened and I'd feel the exact same because too much time passed, she's now permanently as the annoying character that didn't get punished, no matter how much she gets. She will never be seen as a full character if there is even anything past the annoyance, because that's basically the only thing she HAS been, at the very least with Uriel which is exactly what is going to happen because you're telling me she's gonna come with? Just more annoyance because she ain't gonna change, because, again I reiterate, she stayed the same annoying self every time she's with the group, the only time not being the RARE time her kids appeared, which was twice. Two times she looked/sounded at least a tiny bit different. It's ridiculous.

    It's just so tiresome. like 70-80% of my hope for wanting to see how this story would continue vanished instantly. I thought that at the very least, finally no waki there except the occasional reference or appearance or when we arrive here, basically her as NOT a full party member, which is fine enough, but no, she's going to be interfering and ruining stuff there too. I guess at the very least I can be glad waki wasn't as annoying these past chapters (because she wasn't interacting much if at all with uriel and mostly just around him doing stuff to other people and such), but clearly that grace did not last.

    Anyway, to reiterate, it's unfortunate but yes, because waki is now coming with, a lot of me wanting to see a continuation of this did indeed vanish. A little is there because obviously there's still the wonder what happens next. but everything else is gone. Out of everyone to add permanently to the party, it just had to be waki. The worst option besides the church. Who knows if I'll change my mind, I guess it's always possible (usually when I become apathetic towards it which I had kinda did these past chapters a little on waki), but at most, the excitement could return at max to maybe 50% to 60% i don't see it ever getting past that, if even that. Depending on how much I try to ignore waki exists, maybe. Honestly I don't even know. I'm just rambling at this point.

    That really annoyed me, honestly it DID make me somewhat sad, because I knew I was no longer that interested in a continuation. It's almost ridiculous because it wasn't even a line ago that the "punishment" started before the announcement "she's fully part of the team" came. Insanity, it's like a serial killer served a day in prison before being immediately released with "he's good now, trust". Almost as if the plot didn't want the punishment dealt and to say sorry to waki she was immediately rewarded with getting fully into the team. Basically making the previous punishment void (not that it was anything in the first place, at least to me, too long and all that)

    I didn't even have time to attempt to see her as a whole, to see if this "punishment" worked even if it was far too late, trying to just read the rest of the chapter, and maybe another to see if the punishment fully sets or doesn't (probably won't but could have tried), and maybe hopefully by the end of next chapter I'd have been able to see her more whole who knows. Nope, she was just immediately part of the team. Only a single line if that, between she's in the team and that "punishment"

    Thinking back, in the end the only one punished was Waki, the elders got to scoot on by as if they didn't do a thing. Yeah that really was pointless. That sucked. Basically one scapegoat for the whole gang to scoot by. Ridiculous.

    On another note to hopefully force myself to think about something better as if pretending that the garbage didn't happen and to not have you deal with this for this long. It's something I've been meaning to say but kept forgetting for like 2 chapters or something. Which is that I feel like Keme and Ceara could end up together. Idk, felt like it was gonna happen or that it'd be cool for that to happen. Who knows.

    Anyway I'll stop rambling. Good chance I repeated myself a bunch, I just got so tired I didn't even want to bother writing it better, hopefully not to a confusing amount and hopefully you understood all that I've said. But yeah, this was... Something.

    I guess next chapter is the last one for sure. I'm definitely totally looking forward to it, and definitely not at all completely deflated because of the waki news because I just know she's gonna be there. And not there as someone that helped but there as fully part of the team which is a BIG difference, definitely not deflated at all. Definitely not cautious and not wanting to see that chapter because of what happened in this one. ha ha. Definitely...

    I'd say looking forward to the last chapter but... For some reason or another, I won't be saying that. Just so tiresome. There's never an end to the waki bs. Just when I had started to tolerate her because other stuff was happening around us, that happens. Very unfortunate.

    Sorry about all this.

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    The Heretic Red Mage
    Chapter:38