Rex

Rex

It's fun to write.
The covers are a pain to make though.

My comments tend to get harsh & heated sometimes when talking about certain points in stories. I apologise in advance as I mean nothing bad by it to you personally, just me beefing with whatever part of the story I'm in at the time.

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    Sep 20, 2026

    So some angels switch to the Kathlan side? I guess that's what happens when your goddess is absent.

    Hm, not gonna lie, I fully expected Milla to have been a dragonborn and that was part of the reason of why the dragon was sealed, guess I was wrong. Though if she were to be an artificial goddess then heaven would be hers no the mutinous angels. Well I'd say still potential that all this is from angels that switch to the Kathlan side.

    There's no hiding from the main goddess, idk what goofy galardos is talking about here. Heck they both prayed to her ages ago.

    So somehow a GODDESS doesn't know anything happening in her own creation, this seems beyond farfetched.

    Hmm, ascend her to godhood early so that the rest don't have the chance to potentially brain wash her or wipe her memories or something. That's fair. A third god appears, how nice. Well assuming they're successful.
    Wonder why angels would rebel.

    Purging her ranks? The goddess? I guess when Kathlan first ascended some angels switched? And she had to purge ranks there. I see. Or I assume.

    The very powerful goddess can't take action easily? Seems like BS to me. Really it's that she's too powerful and would win easily so you had to have a way for her to not immediately do that. This does not convince me. At least it just doesn't seem convincing at all.
    I guess I was right about angels having taken angie out though. I assume he suspects Urielle may be in on it. Well it's either that or she doesn't know shit.

    WEll they grouped together on the seraph, that doesn't mean them individually are stronger than one. On another note, given how extensevely they seem to just be repeating what they already know it really just feels like this is here purely for us to know. which obviously it is, but it's just weird you know? Like confirming it again at the beginning is fair, but given they seem to be now repeating as if doing a play by play it's getting ridiculous. Like galardos already knows this thanks to the memory thing. Obviously we need to know this, but thanks to it starting by giving galardos everything and then following it up by just repeating everything again but outloud, it makes it weird.

    "that was the end of the plan" It would also be the end of the planet. I'd assume Milla is smart enough to not reject it, both because godhood is cool and also the planet dying is not good. Like it's not even up to debate, if she actually did reject it, then she would be beyond damaged in the head.

    So not even Zarielle knows how Kathlan did it and we need to figure it out to have Milla do the same.

    He died but I'm guessing Kathlan is still a god just in whatever realm he inhabits like Zarielle does hers.

    Idk why galardos acting goofy like this "Do you know what happened to kathlan??!?!?!" Good thing we're not kathlan are we? Dumb ass. We need the source to make Milla into a god. It can't be that hard to not fall to the witch queen. And obviously we ain't gonna be slaying her.

    "living god makes it here" Did you mean makes it there? here doesn't feel right. Otherwise, if it truly is here as in the world in general, then why would witch queen care, just avoid her goofy ass.

    Guaranteed the demon numbers are not in fact infinite. If they were, then so are the angels. And at that point the rebels can't be THAT many. Though I still don't know why they switched so I guess who knows.
    Still though, Kathlan opened a whole gate and the only thing zarielle can do is just keep it closed, not even get rid of it ? That seems weird.

    Damn, now we for sure can't get the help of the fiancee and urielle. Though I guess there's more stuff that might indicate urielle to have reason to be suspected, but eh.

    "keepsake for his mother" Like it was meant to be given to her but she died? or is it type and should be from his mother? Kinda crazy if its from her given how its made.

    "I know failure means everyone dies, but if I use the OP sword then some people will know you're helping" Who actually gives a flying fuck. This guy is actually demented. The world is at stake, who gives a shit if they know she's helping, fucking dye the sword some other color or some shit, pretend you just have a replica, so many ways around this. This one is PURE BS. The stakes couldn't be higher, and he pulls some dumb ass shit like this.

    She absolutely can give it back, Galardos is just beyond stupid.

    Transfer ownership my ass. She has 100+ knights, the sword is his. He can say whatever he wants, it will always be his.

    The last section made the whole chapter fall apart for me, I didn't like it. What a shame.

    On another note, Isabella is probably trustworthy, I feel like there's now way she'd switch sides. Not that they'll say shit. Especially with the goddess not wanting them to now.
    Remade comment to fix words and typos.

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    Onwards!
    I'm Not Paid Enough To Be The Hero
    Chapter:36

    Sep 20, 2026

    Sabotaged twice? First one must have been off screen I guess, probably last year, definitely post having messed up magic. Same way though? Like a random criminal appears or the 4 fake witches appear? If it's the second then it was just Arthur back then.

    What did she do to Myra? Yet another thing that happened off screen? Surely these are not yet 2 more things to keep track of right? none of which is the main mystery whatever it might be.

    "that doesn't mean he couldn't be" So he IS someone who can be suspected, directly after saying he wasn't.

    "what did I just said" typo with said.

    So she suspects this was purely just to sabotage her by having her not appear on stage and do whatever, probably magic, thus probably sabotaging herself thanks to it going haywire. Seems unlikely.

    Ah third attempt, then last time wasn't last year, I see. So she imagines it's someone with the ability to get the teachers away, a known criminal in, knowledge of everything and a reason to sabotage her by stopping her from potentially self sabotaging. Hm.

    Is the "could he fee how fast it was going" sentence a copy of the last one? the second half is definitely the same, unsure of the first. I wonder why she doesn't like admitting her feelings. If I had to guess it's probably a mix of having prioritized studying and her shot confidence so no room for confessions.

    Something had already ended, perhaps her dignity. Jokes aside he should get off his ass and get her on the DAMN BED. I'm starting to realize why exactly she wouldn't want to admit to liking his goofy ass.

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    Senzai Majo
    The (Cursed) Potential Witch
    Chapter:15

    Sep 20, 2026

    To:Ryuukarize

    Best reaction as in the whole comment or what specifically?

    No one knows because it's being kept secret by the kingdom... That he existed? Or I guess whether he's still alive or not? Because he is taught, so it can't be the first one.

    Homunculus wasn't random? So she knows another homunculus, wonder who. Myra is a spirit or whatever so not her... Hm well I don't even know if it's been introduced yet, but good to know.

    The only thing I remember is "does he exist, does he not? who knows" not whether he's alive or not. Probably because Clara keeps repeating that if I remember right.

    If alive or not is related to the mechanism of magic, then he must still be alive. Probably what keeps the magic ticking. Heck could be all this is no true magic system at all, as in it's all fabricated from the sage, and when he dies this system dies too, because the real way he got magic was something else and then it'd be up to the people to figure it out again, that's what I imagine at least.

    Yeah I can tell but not at a glance. Like sometimes it's obvious, sometimes it's her half narrating half talking to us, and other times it's just pure narration. Though most of the time it's the second one, she basically only does the first one when it's mid conversation.

    So either her or lily or whoever has been fabricated, memories changed or whatever. Ngl that just feels annoying, I have no context, nothing to go off of, but I can already feel whatever that's about, that it's somehow going to be annoying.

    Interesting info.

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    Senzai Majo
    The (Cursed) Potential Witch
    Chapter:14

    Sep 20, 2026

    To:SirSleepsALot

    All will make sense in the end. Can't believe though, son of a gun cracked the code. (I'd say bitch but unsure if we're quite there yet even as a joke, so I switched to gun, just in case for now)

    I'm not gonna lie, that made me even more confused as to what the city looks like now. Wait.... Is it that the cliff itself is the wall? so when they climbed they basically got on the same level as the troops that were patrolling at the top of the walls? That could definitely be more clear. Still though, regardless of that, the buildings should be in front of us not to our left, because regardless we still looked south for some reason.

    Well so far you did have enough to sort of guess at the classes (I can't remember their names but), something like the white mage being some debuffer/warlock type thing, then the tanks with golden shield, then the archers, then healers. Can't remember any other.
    Though the gods would have been interesting, both to know names and... Well I guess besides that would only be how their blessings work, but we already know that thanks to fighting the church. At least some of them.

    Could have fooled me with those first few chapters. So the upcoming siege chapter(s) is cut down a lot huh? Good to know.
    On another note I feel like I am similar to you on that, not sure if I'm good at writing fight scenes at all. Though I'm still proud of what I did, like on my previous story of Staving off Boredom (what I call it for short), and others. You're probably better than me at it though.

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    The Heretic Red Mage
    Chapter:31





    Sep 19, 2026

    Two chapters in a single day. Gotten more used to and faster at writing or did you write so much it needed splitting. I wonder which it is. Either way, nice.

    "everything changed" WHEN THE FIRE NATION ATTA-!? Joking.
    Only after did I realize the settlement was the northern one and not Harrowford, lol.

    several oracles? I thought there was only the two? one per tribe. I guess it's a different system?
    Wow there really is a lot more oracles. Have I missed this? I feel like it's something that would have been mentioned before.

    "renewed reason to live" feels like a typo, like it should be a renewed or renewed my reason. Unsure if it is.

    He changed? Unsure what waki means here.

    I'm not gonna lie the whole "I did not expect you to forget" exchange was funny because "I still remember what happened" "I didn't expect you to forget" "I have not forgotten." Like, she JUST said that, yet he still double, triple clarified it.

    "i think you finished" also feels like a typo but I'm not sure. Because it works but I almost feel like it should be "i think you are finished". Dunno though.

    pretty sure we spent several days planning not telling other people what they need. When that happened I don't even think it was several days. Heck, I don't even think it happened at all.

    "her fell away" I know THIS one is a typo, missing word "hand".

    HE WAS ACTUALLY USING THE PIPE, HOW MANY TIMES MUST HE BE THIS STUPID. It probably won't be laced with drugs again but that doesn't matter, stop using the fucking pipe, how dumb can one person be. Is he seriously gonna stab himself with a spike 5 times too to really make sure that a spike is in fact a spike and he should not be stabbing himself with it? or stabbing himself at all in general for that matter. To be honest just having to tolerate her touching him is annoying. Especially after knowing there are OTHER oracles.

    permanent peace doesn't help you get punished.

    Somehow I either forgot or this is the first time I realize/we're told she has wings.

    two goddesses danced badly? For a moment I thought he was calling Nimiwa a goddess, but she didn't dance badly and Hanwi picked it up within a minute, if he was talking about Tawa and Kumakun, then wouldn't it be gods?

    One of the better chapters in a long while. I actually put a like. It was interesting seeing their tradition, with the paint and dance and all that. A nice ceremony. And obviously dancing with Nimiwa is a plus. Nice chapter indeed.

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    The Heretic Red Mage
    Chapter:30