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K-J-Whitten

Explorer of fantasy. Daydreamer. Protector of waifus. But most of all, I’m a writer! My name is K. J. Whitten. Though some readers call me KJ. Each story is a part of myself that I give to you.

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Aug 25, 2021

To:kazesenken

You're welcome!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Aug 25, 2021

Oh, Dolly! Its not your fault! Someone give her a hug and tell her not to blame herself, please.

Anyways, I'm ready for storytime! I wonder what we will learn, though part of me wonders if Runo is really going to tell us everything since he hid important info before. He feels like a good person so far but how he reacted to his hidden eye makes me especially suspicous. Is it a weapon? Or perhaps a bad battle scar with traumatic history?

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:8

Aug 25, 2021

Another fun chapter! Once again, he proves to be a jellyfish of culture. Beastkin girls, Banzai!

Just want to point out real quick, it should say esentially where you wrote esential: "...Trifecta had esential cut their progression time in half."

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Aug 24, 2021

Those are some big stakes for our hero Evan. Luckily he has help in the form of a badass amputee and a fangirl with her own set of proud acomplishments. Looking forward to what happens next!

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:4

Aug 23, 2021

To:Wolfy

1.) The hair clip is a weapon (or a key to a weapon) or holds secret infromation. 2.) The girl is Aystaria in disguise and she was trying to test her.
3.) The girl wants to kidnap her and works for someone who wants Emyria.

Six

Chapter:6

Aug 22, 2021

Hmm, I wonder what this girl wants with a simple hair clip? I can think of at least three theories as to why. Those moments with Aystaria were hillarious. Looking forward to reading more!

Six

Chapter:6

Aug 22, 2021

Just wanted to let you know that there is a spelling mistake in the last sentence.

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:9

Aug 21, 2021

To:kazesenken

Ah ok. Re-reading what was said, I see what you mean. Thought it was a truth spell for a second.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:8

Aug 21, 2021

I see what you did there. Even though in the back of my mind I knew it wasn't that - it still got me at first lol. That grimoire could be useful for interrogation. Probably for the best to save it for later. Is Kaa-san Snazzy's mom?

Anyways, will be back for another chapter of their adventures!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:8

Aug 21, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

You're welcome! And I appreciate you too. :) ❤️

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:6

Aug 21, 2021

So Evan can remember some memories from Hanosuke? Interesting. That means either this is a younger version of himself in his older body or Evan somehow has the ability to recall certain memories from him. At least Seraya Bladecrest (cool name btw) is willing to help him figure out what's going on. Will be looking forward to reading the next chapter!

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:2

Aug 20, 2021

Ah, so the dragon Phos met is Aurelia! Nice, the previous plot events now connect. After helping her he felt something strange. A link? Phos knows what this is however Aurelia doesn't seem to.

Anyways, just want to point out an error I noticed. In this sentence, you have a random letter f present: "He started rubbing small drops of f ointment on her cuts and dabbing away blood and grit with his cloth."

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:8

Aug 20, 2021

A heart shapped energy bar...feels bad man. Its the first one Dolly ever gets and it had to be from him T-T. Interesting that he tried to stop himself, makes you wonder if the hyacinths triggered something or if because Noah remembered her? We will never know like this chapter says. I'm also curious if Netty knows about what monsters really are.

Anyways, looking forward to reading what happens next!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:6

Aug 17, 2021

To:Vulp

You're welcome!

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:7

Aug 16, 2021

Might want to look over the first sentence of this chapter. To me, it sounds like it should be two sentences instead of one. Also, cracklings pops should say crackling pops.

Anyways, good chapter as always! Can't wait to see what happened to this dragon and what their story is.

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:7

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