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K-J-Whitten

Explorer of fantasy. Daydreamer. Protector of waifus. But most of all, I’m a writer! My name is K. J. Whitten. Though some readers call me KJ. Each story is a part of myself that I give to you.

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Jul 21, 2021

To:Vulp

You're welcome!

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:2

Jul 20, 2021

So we switched perspectives to a dragon. Interesting. Will be looking forward to where this is going!

By the way, I found a mistake while I was reading. There was a sentence that said: "...female dragons were always larger than then males.", which should say than the males, not than then.

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:2

Jul 18, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

You're welcome!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

Did you rewrite the first chapter? Could've sworn I read this already. Anyways, I spotted a couple mistakes. The first one is this: "The android squinted with disgust, but she struggled it off and decided to ask him about something relevant.", It should say shrugged it off, and not struggled it off. The other mistake is that you referred to Noah as a man twice when you said he's a boy.

Good job and looking forward to reading the next chapter!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

I feel bad for Snazzy-chan but at least he gets to save witches as a jellyfish, so it's not all bad. I like the fact that he has such a positive view on life. Which I can see being helpful in this particular world. Looking forward to reading more!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:2

Jul 16, 2021

For someone who is new to writing, this is very good! There is one sentence where you missed a period and the word drug should be drag. Anyways, it will be interesting to see where this goes. I like dragons too which is why I had to add this to my library. :)

DRAGON’S FLIGHT

Chapter:0

Jul 16, 2021

The undertaker and knights seem to be very through. Making decisions without a second thought. But now, we see Aystaria present after the beginning of the story, which means something happened for her to be alive and well? And for some reason, she is tutoring Emyria...all questions that will be answered in due time. :)

Six

Chapter:1

Jul 15, 2021

To:kazesenken

Sometimes comedy can be hard to write but I'm sure you'll do fine. Just remember to have fun with the story and try to write it the best you can. Books don't have to be perfect to be enjoyed by readers. :)

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Jul 15, 2021

Pretty fun story so far. Kind of reminds me of Konosuba with the suggestive comedy. Looking forward to reading more!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Jul 12, 2021

Mysterious and exciting! I wonder what these monsters are, and what this last monster is. This has potential for an interesting story, that's for sure. :)

Six

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Quick little thing I wanted to point out. Where it says: "...I only had to wait for the light to turn green before my dream would be realized.", I think you meant to say turn red. Anyways, it's a good start. Looking forward to more!

That Time I Was Reincarnated as an Aspiring Author and Got Exploited by a Multimedia Company to Kickstart Their New Franchise!

Chapter:0

May 18, 2021

"All I can say is that this girl's style is completely over the top, and who knows? Other people might agree with me."
They actually do agree with you, Haru. Over the top is what extra means lol.

It’s My First Time Working Late Nights at a Convenience Store, and If I Keep Getting Demon Lords, Kappa and Other Oddballs as Customers, I’m Giving My Two-Weeks’ Notice

Chapter:18

May 18, 2021

Another good chapter with an interesting cliffhanger. The only thing I found wrong here is that somber is misspelled twice. Though in my opinion, I would remove one of those somber words to make it feel less repetitive.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:5

Apr 17, 2021

To:Ana Fowl

Yeah, it's a shorter chapter. I intended it to be that way because I feel like it would drag on if I put it at the usual length and not much happens anyways, so it felt right to keep it short.

Thank you for reading, I'm also glad you came back for more of Josie and Alice's story. 🙂

Do you dream of me in the next life?

Chapter:14

Mar 22, 2021

To:Ana Fowl

The part with the four Nightmares at the table is a part of the scene. Its what's on the other side of the door that Charity opens. Would it be better to say, "In the room were four Nightmares seated at a table." or something else in your opinion?

Do you dream of me in the next life?

Chapter:13

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