Sep 05, 2021
So the tongue monster wants something from Runo? Hmm, maybe it has to do with his eye? Nah. It can't be it. Unless...👀
Also, Netty and Runo just got tongued! Hopefully Runo survives in the next chapter and Dolly pulls through. Or Runo, or someone else who happens to be nearby.
Before I forget to mention, I found a couple mistakes. The first one is this sentence: "The android and the monster were both falling from the air at this point, so she immediately aimed tried to aim for its head." It should say tried to aim for its head or aimed for its head. The second mistake is this: "He wanted to destroy through the monster's face so badly and leave another permanent mark." I think you meant to say thoroughly destroy the monster's face?
Anyways, good chapter! Will be back for more later. :)
