Jio Kurenai

Jio Kurenai

Author of Parable of the Renegades, or ParaRene for short.

Aspiring Game Designer and writer who loves it when games and stories get married to create an experience.

Criticism of my work is definitely welcome, so long as it's constructive!

I'm also looking forward to reading what you write! ;D

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June 21st, 2020 was the last time "Parable of the Renegades" made it to the #1 spot in both the Weekly and Monthly Rankings!

As this is my first web novel, I can't ever hope to describe how ecstatic I am! Thank you to all my readers for the rad comments, which I always make time to read. I hope I can continue to write prose that makes your already satisfying day even better!

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    Jul 28, 2019

    To:Gerry Hines

    On Twitter, I wasn't direct about the sketch being drawn by Davis storywise, but I tried to hint it out by having Hikarisoul include his signature on the bottom right of the image. She wrote it the same way she does her signature. I can imagine him doing more sketches of people for all sorts of shenanigans in the future!

    The Violators will be shot sign seems to be a "normal" sign you could find somewhere in real life. Personally, I heard about it in grade school when a friend showed me a picture of it and I found "survivors will be shot again" to be funny. Ah, I was already interested in dark humor before learning about it. XD

    Davis may be a goofy pervert but that doesn't mean he always treats girls as objects of lust. He feels like it would leave a bad aftertaste to trample on their feelings in any way like how he was also disgusted at how Austin and Sage dangled Viola's purse just barely beyond her reach in her re-introduction. At the end of his chapter, however, he couldn't help but give in to his hormones and stare, especially since it was Viola's own doing that made the opportunity appear right in front of him. He doesn't consider himself guilty for that. XD

    Lastly, it feels right for me that I try to give my readers more than just a new chapter whenever I can. I don't see myself as someone with a big reputation when it comes to the oceanic writing community so I try to give what I can to not get lost in the shuffle. It's also because I want to express my gratitude for those who continue to ride the ParaRene bandwagon even after all this time. :D

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    Jul 05, 2019

    To:Gerry Hines

    For me, I got "Desquiciado" when I was looking for a Spanish translation for the word, "unhinged." I chose to name the district as such because a few places I've been to in America have the "San" suffix. I have relatives who live in San Bruno, and I have a cousin who graduated from a college in San Jose to name a few.

    About the blond man's name... yeah, I'm sorry it wasn't revealed in this chapter, and I'm going to have to make another apology in advance. More about the gauntlet will be revealed little by little, though.

    The student council president was never mentioned before. I just thought it'd be fun to show how he deals with the burden of his responsibilities. It's like the hardworking office lady who drops her professionalism and lets loose in just her underwear whenever she arrives home from a rough day at work.

    You're right about how I felt when HikariSoul first showed me the cover. She went beyond my expectations and even expanded my ideas with the production, just like what she did for my characters. I can't thank her enough for that. Still, it's actually incomplete as there are parts of the artwork that are lacking in detail when compared to other parts of it. The cover was going to be the reveal for the #EndofMay, but sudden things had to get in the way and delay the progress.

    I didn't want to publish my next chapter without the new cover, but I felt like ParaRene had been stagnant for far too long without an update for two months so I decided to reveal it early. At least the main attraction of the cover was already finished. I'll update the cover again once it's really done.

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    Jun 05, 2019

    To:Gerry Hines

    Ever since her role ended around the first half of volume 1, I've been itching for the day I could finally bring Viola back after finalizing her character. I'm just ecstatic that the time had finally come and I hope I did a good job re-introducing her to you!

    Viola was the healer I was talking about when I commented about your character, Sandra, playing that role in your work. Based on a quote Viola said in volume 1 about how she's supposed to be taking care of people and not beating them up, I wanted to hold it up to her and give her a generally non-lethal martial artist fighting style that she brought from studying abroad.

    I intended to make her a martial artist since her first appearance but there were some aspects that still needed tweaking so I didn't make her show off too much. I felt that manipulating an opponent to become harmless would suit her just fine as she doesn't have to cause actual pain. Of course, if trying to fight like a pacifist won't work, she can always resort to doing actual damage like how she impaled the brick wall. XD

    It was a whole lot of fun making her steal Davis' wallet to get his name. That idea came around while I was writing their re-acquaintance.

    San Desquiciado has a lot of intriguing stuff, in my opinion. Just brave the lawless dangers first and you might be in for some sweet loot!

    Unfortunately for those who now see through the 4th wall thanks to the Doom Lagoon, everyone else thinks their heads are up in the clouds. XD

    Thanks for spotting that error. It was supposed to say "The asphalt screeched below her as she spun on a heel..." I'll have that fixed once my next chapter is published.

    A huge thanks for the lovely comment, man! I've been waiting for anyone to give their thoughts to this chapter as this is currently the one I enjoyed writing the most.

    I hope Davis and Viola are doing a great job so far. I have to make up for the lack of screentime they had in Volume 1!

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    May 20, 2019

    Welcome back, Gerry! Your comment was a great way to start this week for me, so a big thanks from me for that!

    I've done the corrections to the typos you've mentioned along with some other errors I noticed on the way. Appreciate it lots. I sometimes forget a few typos I point out to others because we can't copy and paste here.

    During the typo-busting, I also realized I've given too much character to Mary Glow and her faction so I also took the time to expand a little more on Lord Xavion's faction. No significant changes to the plot, mind you. Their overall actions remained the same as before but I spiced them up a little more so they could have a more contending presence. As for the organist, I was thinking it would be funny if he wasn't playing his heart-pounding music. Imagine Lord Xavion's devotees doing some acapella chanting with "Latin" lyrics they're just saying at the top of their heads.

    On the topic of the blond man, I can say his role will affect the rest of the volume, but his gauntlet will be more important. If you thought Bruno and Brody's fate was brutal, wait till you continue. I played Mortal Kombat 11 not just because I'm a fan of the series. ;)

    I'm no longer forcing myself to write. It's truly when I'm not thinking about it and doing other stuff that the urge to get back to my keyboard comes sooner. Until then, I'll do what I feel like doing and I gotta say, I'm much happier that way whether or not I'm writing.

    Lastly, thanks for taking some time during your busy schedule to continue my story! I also have to catch up with your work, but I'm dedicating the rest of May to finish some goals I've set upon myself alongside HikariSoul, so you'll be hearing my next thoughts after this month ends!

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    Apr 06, 2019

    To:TrinityNovels

    The blond man didn't teleport. He was pulled to the sword he launched away at an inhuman speed by an invisible force and yes, it was the gauntlet that allowed him to do that. Think of the airstep ability in Kingdom Hearts 3 where Sora can quickly dash to a shotlocked target in an instant. It's the same mechanic except I'm also including the insane momentum from going too fast.

    That's also why the blond man was reluctant to use that ability since his legs and right arm are not in the right condition to help keep him catch his bearings after the momentum-based dash. The sword was also lying flat on the ground the last time he used it, so he ended up skidding to it with his body flat on the ground. Rough terrain plus friction burns from going too fast. Ouch.

    "As I whip out my Boomstick!" was not a direct quote but it was a reference to the movie, "Evil Dead" where the protagonist, Ash easily defeats a group of attacking medieval knights and a sorcerer by powering through their shields, armor, and magic with a chainsaw and a shotgun (American Isekai! XD). He also scared the rest of the people by calling the shotgun a "Boomstick." You can look it up on Youtube, or I can link you the video if you like. :)

    Since crime is considered legal in San Desquiciado, most people there have developed a lack of remorse for killing since they don't have to worry about their criminal records getting defiled by the act when they leave the district to go back to their regular lives outside it.

    As hinted by his response to the blond man's armor-piercing question, Davis has killed someone before that recent moment he shot Josh the hooligan in the stomach. Davis points out, however, that he only did something like that while he was in San Desquiciado and he's not proud of the times he did so.

    I'm very glad you liked the Wolfsbane! I think there's some potential for creative uses with its function and I'm happy I was able to showcase Fenris' physical capabilities while wielding it. We're not even digging into his [Laws] yet, but I hope the name of the one that was mentioned here may give you an idea on what it will do. Maybe not exactly, but an idea at least.

    I hope I covered all headscratchers you may have gotten from this chapter. If not, feel free to ask away! Just like you, I absolutely love answering questions regarding my novel!

    So yeah, that's it for now. I'm also excited for the next chapter as well. Who did Davis recognize in the end? A hint to that will be given in a future tweet!

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