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Jun 08, 2022

Yes. This feeling is indeed the one I usually get after finishing a volume of a light novel. I'd lean back and think about this book I just read, then double-check my shelf to make sure this was indeed the most up-to-date volume I own. With a happy nod at having read something I liked, I would then spend my days reading something else, always thinking about that one story that needs to be continued.

Thankfully I won't have to wait any longer. The second volume is out and ready to be consumed by this hungry reader.

Somehow this novel just worked. The polished writing style combined with the light novel tone and an intriguing start (still like it more without the prologue) leading into a meaty middle and an exciting climax... It just worked.

This is so good I'd buy it if it was an eBook or Paperback. Heck, some of the stuff I bought on Amazon was more amateurishly crafted than this.

Big props and I'll see you in volume 2. 😌🙏🏻

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:30

Jun 08, 2022

I didn't expect them to best one of the other heroes as a climax, but I have a feeling this is about to be satisfying.

And it sorta was something Evan learned from the dream, or at least his sister. I certainly hope you included some more of her in the second volume. 😤👌🏻

Something about little sisters behaving like sassy brats is just wholesome in the sibling context.

Anyway - of course he would do something like that. Big FU to that guy, even though he's probably going on a rampage since his feelings were shattered earlier. Just proves that heroes need some containment, though I still wonder about the effects of this new law...

Ah, so many things to be addressed in the future! 🤯

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:29

Jun 08, 2022

Very well done. Evan didn't get a random power-up, he did sorta talk Remus out of whatever he was doing, and Sereya came with an appreciation for Meleyze, though I don't think she nodded? I'm too excited for the rest to care about details right now.

Let's see how these heroes fight, then.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:28

Jun 08, 2022

You wouldn't gove him a sudden ass-pull ability, would you?

What I hope he does is either talk Remus into cooperation somehow (cause he had one simulated conversation with him in dream land and he could've learned from that or some BS like that) or Seleya jumps into the fray with a nod to Meleyze...

And now onwards!

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:27

Jun 08, 2022

Well, if the council was the meat of the story, then this must be the climax. Meleyze must know that Evan isn't the hero by this point, right? Maybe Seleya dragged her off after the meeting to explain to her who she just involved in the world's politics.

Anyway, Seleya wasn't even serious against Meleyze before. A one-armed easy-going hero beat this crazy strong girl with only a wound on her arm, so there's no way she can beat Remus alone.

Excitement overload. 😤

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:26

Jun 08, 2022

To:Harmonica Writes

How can I explain it?

This thing feels like a light novel, as I and others have previously stated. Much of the beginning was the introduction to the characters and world (duh). That fight between Meleyze and Seleya was our first look into the future challenges - and I mean concrete look and not some distant thing another character says or mentions. Then the council happens right after that beautiful dream sequence when tension is still running high. We see Remus, but Seleya votes the same as him, and Evan votes against her, and while everyone is cheering we can only remember how childish Seleya can come across sometimes, and, and, and...

I don't know if that is even an explanation or a summary, but that's why I felt it was well done.

Good job.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:23

Jun 08, 2022

Love how this actually feels like a backwater town, or at least some bigger village not in the immediate surroundings of a large city.

Everyone's coming to say farewell to one of their own, trying to escape their little world and making it in the big wide expanse of everywhere. I liked that sequence.

June is precious, too. I hope we get more of her.

Farwell tour, huh? Straining sports don't offer long careers, but I'm happy that Mina can see her one last time in her new home for 4 years.

I'm loving this one already. It's full of heart.

Then again, if this is a smaller town in this world, my guess is air dancing is, like, REALLY popular, right? The class wasn't described as that small or anything, and Mina even said that a few of them might make it as professionals if they kept at it. Or is the hype for air dancing just really high in this place? Or is it not actually that backwater, although everything the people there do suggests that it is?

The Perfect Place to Dance is Anywhere

Chapter:4

Jun 08, 2022

I haven't been through anything like what she's going through now, what with moving away and leaving a life behind or anything like that.

What I have gone through is leaving home for two weeks to go to camp and finishing a social year at a school, both of which already caused me to feel horrified at the unknown future.

This chapter of coming to terms with stuff is important and you did well with it.

I have, however another question about this story. How heavy are these angelkin and all the others? Do physics work the same as in our world? I know fantasy stories ignored that for forever, but wouldn't human-sized creatures with human weight need wings of 10 meters or so? I might remember the number wrong, but they'd need BIG F*UCKING wings.😤

The Perfect Place to Dance is Anywhere

Chapter:3

Jun 08, 2022

Very cute, very cute.

Was this the first mention of Mina being an angelkin? Perhaps it was mentioned before, but alright. Combined with the demonkin kid from before we can assume that there is no racism or any similar tension between races in this world? Just harsh competition to become the best dancer?

This chapter is sugar-sweet. Good job by the dad, and good going for Mina.

Arriving late to the school year can be a b*tch though. Relationships are already established and you feel like an outsider to the main group. It's nothing but painful if you are unlucky. Since this is a story I bet she will be unlucky... Maybe a bit of luck mixed in there for this angel? Pretty please?

The Perfect Place to Dance is Anywhere

Chapter:2

Jun 08, 2022

I wonder if confusion is just a part of this one. For a while I wondered if we suddenly had a second teacher-protagonist before I went back and checked Mina's name.

Usually these sorts of stories start with the student arriving at school and then struggling their way to the top, especially if the synopsis promises as much.

I guess she's at least old enough to do these substitute lessons in clubs now? Or is she a full-fledged teacher/instructor here?

To be fair this confusion mostly comes from my inability to hold information (but mostly names) in my peanut brain. I enjoy it otherwise. 👼🏻👌🏻 (Couldn't find a better one with wings, lol.)

The Perfect Place to Dance is Anywhere

Chapter:1

Jun 08, 2022

For about 5 minutes I was very confused - then I more closely inspected the cover artwork and spotted the wings on the main girl. Then everything made sense.

Sounds like our girl shares the boys' dreams, though. What this dancer does is very much a sport too, and quite a dangerous one at if you attempt what this dancer did.

Sometimes the prologue tells you how the book will end, and so I shall attempt my own prediction before the actual plot begins: The MC girl will surpass her idol by not messing up the trick in the last chapter. Any cool diversions from the norm are always welcome, of course.

Mad props to the dancer, too. Reminds me of Midoriya when he keeps smashing although his arms and fingers are already torn and broken at the start.

The Perfect Place to Dance is Anywhere

Chapter:0

Jun 08, 2022

And this is where you stop? When the plot lines finally somewhat converge? Oh, my poor curiosity... Never shall you be satisfied again... 😭

Does time work differently for these Undertakers? Do they really just walk to whereever they are needed? Maybe that's the point, but that's awfully inconvenient. They must be looking forward to smart driving that doesn't need a driver, because then they can drive by car to their destinations (without causing a mass panic or needless suspicions).

A Reaper's Fate

Chapter:7

Jun 08, 2022

Ah, so these four are related to those exorcists in some way... Still confusing as hell. This reads like a totally different story from the stuff before with immortal reapers and ghosts etc.

I'm starting to get immersed again, so I guess it's fine in the end.

A Reaper's Fate

Chapter:6

Jun 08, 2022

"This was the consequence of saving the world when I couldn't even save myself."

"Roll credits!"

This has to be quite the trauma to live through, seeing some pretender prance around like they're the real deal and then realize that the real deal is gone forever. The pretender is all you have left of your friend.

I heard that some soldiers can't stand normalcy after returning from war. In war they fought as one with their brothers and sisters, but at home everyone is just there, barely connecting at all. And now Remus's brother is gone. Damn.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:25

Jun 08, 2022

Oho? The infamous sleeping pills? Or just the stress catching up to Evan? I suspect Remus knows what's up - even knows that Hanasuke was from another place.

As we're nearing the end of the first volume I just find myself questioning what the arc is supposed to be? Evan is not Hanasuke, and I don't think it's his magic or anything that he will unlock somehow. At most I could see Sereya swear loyalty to him and forget her lost love...

Ah, I'll see.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:24

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