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I don't know what to say about myself, I just like telling stories, so please enjoy.

registered at: Jun 27, 2021

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Sep 03, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Glad he thought of it, cause I would never have come up with it.

Just making sure I understand your meta comment, do you mean contact as in people knowing each other or contact in the physical kind?

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:8

Aug 28, 2021

Yeah, luckily, no one was crushed under the weight of all of them.

And thank you for bring it to my attention, I am trying to keep them out, but I am not the best at catching it.

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:7

Aug 28, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Oh, indeed, he shall. Though, I hope I can get to it before the end of this contest. *sweats bullets*

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:6

Aug 12, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Never thought of it that way. I just wrote from how the characters would perceive the situation and react accordingly. Didn't think of how the audience would take it. Thank you for the insight.

And yes, I now notice it too, I should fix that, as it is a problem I struggle with regularly.

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:5

Aug 12, 2021

I am amazed how effective your writing is. Short chapter, in comparison to others, that gets right to the point without mincing words and is filled to the brim with detail. Even better than that praise, it's still incredibly enjoying to read. Keep up the fantastic work!

Mylo and the Summoned Hero

Chapter:2

Aug 12, 2021

The world building is simple but super effective. Though I will admit I am curious about some of the details not making a lot of sense. Like the person that appears on the tower first. Is that kasumi? Some details seem to be accidentally omitted.

Mylo and the Summoned Hero

Chapter:1

Aug 11, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Hmm, I will have to keep an eye out for that. Don't want to seem too redundant this early on, that's for later volumes 😛

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:4

Aug 10, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Thank you for the criticism, I greatly appreciate it and need more of it. And I do agree with you, it was hard to add in all of the details I wanted to diegetically, but I thought it might work here. I am a new writer, so I am still learning, still practicing the craft.

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:3

Aug 09, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

No she can't headlock you from where she is, but if she was able to, I am sure I would be first on her list. She may not like me by the end.

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:2

Aug 09, 2021

Most of the more interesting LN's usually have a twist on a concept like that, thought I admit I tried to add as many of those twists as possible to mine. Might be a bit of an undertaking.

But if yours has a similar concept to mine, I will have to give yours a shot.

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:1

Jul 30, 2021

To:Syed Al Wasee

Thank you very much for your kind words. And yes, whenever you do get a moment be sure to check back. I promise to do the same

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:0

Jul 27, 2021

To:jaldaen

Thank you for your kind words. I hope you enjoy future chapters as they come out!

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:0

Jul 12, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you, I just hope I can get to that point of the story in a timely fashion😅

I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

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