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Yoshino

I don't know what to say about myself, I just like telling stories, so please enjoy.

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Jun 04, 2023

To:Christian Widjaya

Thank you, this is a balance I strive for. Glad its turning out for once!

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2023

To:kazesenken

I promise I wont!

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

Thank you so much! I hope I can live up to your expectations!

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2023

To:Kitsune

Gah, you guys are making me nervous with expectations. I am not as good as a bunch of 4chan writers, so don't expect much. Love you guys regardless though!

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2023

To:Harmonica Writes

I never thought of the connection between this and Katawa Shoujo. Haha, makes me nervous for the shadow I am trying to fill.😅

As for the characters, depending on who, they will recover, in different ways.

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2022

To:Arashi Sensei

I know I would for sure if I could end up with a girl like Mari.
I let you know something. Every chapter I have written so far has hit the character limit HF has per chapter, so technically each chapter is shorter than what I wanted it to be.
Honestly, I planned it to be a 5 act (chapter) story, broken up into roughly 2-4 scenes per act, but now, its all sorts of jumbled up from what I planned. Gets hard trying to find a point that's a safe cut off point and still fits the character limit. LOL

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My Life as a Complete Social Recluse Has Come to an Abrupt End.

Chapter:1

Jun 20, 2022

Probably the funniest chapter you have written yet. Timing is perfect and the characters and the perfect stooges to fall of such simple antics.

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Chapter:4

Jun 18, 2022

Yes. But there are reasons why he is so rough. Maybe good reasons, maybe bad. Maybe even both. But Mari will be the catalyst to bring them all to the surface. And hopefully, if all goes as planned, it will take 5 volumes worth of work to resolve his problems.

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My Life as a Complete Social Recluse Has Come to an Abrupt End.

Chapter:2

Jun 16, 2022

Nekkau knows something. My only problem with that is, she seems to have been dumped into the story. I barely remembered her when she came back up in this chapter.

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Chapter:2

Jun 16, 2022

Well that's one way to build some suspense and intrigue. Glad to see you giving it your all in this one!

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Chapter:1

Jun 12, 2022

To:Ataga Corliss

The fake out might take a little while, but I think its an effective hook.

Thank you, I try to improve with each new thing I write. I feel like Minato is a character anyone can kind a bit of themself in from time to time, so I hope his interactions stay engaging. As for Sato, I hope I can keep her grounded enough that she doesn't feel like I don't know what to do with her.

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My Life as a Complete Social Recluse Has Come to an Abrupt End.

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

That is a really good point. And you are right. I just hope my fried brain can handle it. Wish me luck.

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I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:10

Sep 05, 2021

We did it! Thank you for sticking it out til the end! Now I just need to finishing reading yours.

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I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:11

Sep 05, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Thank you ever so much for saying that. Honestly I am upset that this is where I left this. My original plan was to have this be the halfway mark of the story for volume 1. But to make it under the wire for this contest, I had to gut the story pretty severely. I agree this is completely against the worldbuilding I have set up, but I did write this while I was very sleep deprived and struggling to get it to work. I apologize. I will do better the next time around.

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I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:10

Sep 05, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Lawrence better be prepared, cause he has more women on the way in later volumes.
Yeah, I am stressing to get it done in time, so my ability to write creatively is draining
so much so I can't spell my own character's name...

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I Was Tasked With Defeating The Demon Lord, But For Some Reason, She Is Now My Girlfriend!?

Chapter:9