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Jun 22, 2023

Team sport themes can be problematic about number of characters. Until this chapter I could recognize lot of them bu I need some time for it. I want to create a lot of characters, too. However it's always bad for a web novel. Good luck with familiarize the readers with all characters 👍

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:9

Jun 20, 2023

We learn something about MC. He is a huge guy.
But why did not those two learn their names? 😀

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:2

Jun 20, 2023

At first I thought I would get bored since I had to read all moves of mc. Then I imagined the first chapter as an anime and that became funny. Think about it. You hope exciting something will happen in the first episode and you get suprise nothing happened. But you're not lonely lol MC got suprised too. He is sitting on a desk and rumbling his hair. His inner thoughts "That should be my story lol why nothing happened" xD

I can't wait to see what will happen 😊

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:1

Jun 16, 2023

To:Christian Widjaya

Thanks for correction. I need to reread and fix my mistakes ☺️

Found You, My Bride [will be posted later]

Chapter:1

Jun 14, 2023

Also, I'm glad not to see unnecesarry personal description of the characters in a hurry scenario. The main male character even thought that it was no time to think lol

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:1

Jun 14, 2023

I like the end of the chapter. It makes us to want to read next chapter. And, I wonder why the boy thinks differently than townspeople do. It seems like we will see 👍

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2023

To:Shulox

Yeah, the scenario will become a funny run-catch issue. But the prince has a real excuse to chase after that girl lol

By the way I love your PP. He is my baby. My house is full of his stuffs 😍

Thank you fot your reading my story☺️

Found You, My Bride [will be posted later]

Chapter:2

Jun 12, 2023

I like your storytelling. And I like arranged marriages, too 😆 you won me :3

Sword and Love

Chapter:0

Oct 21, 2022

Well, I have been planning to read this story for a while. There is a long way to go for me. Probably I am going to read it a little slowly. You guess my first language is not English.
First of all, I like your description method. I don't like to read "She was wearing a maid dress and she had red hair" stuffs in the middle of the fight or in first appearances. You give us descriptions with their explanations like that his clothes are not suitable for the event.
And, you add a dialect on your character. That makes us wonder if she came from another place here. I'm sure I will enjoy this story and I would like you to excuse me for my comments in this way :)

Gloudhaus

Chapter:0

Oct 15, 2022

To:Spirit9871

You really have a different perspective about this story. Thank you for your comment :) I'm gonna post a story about an old man in this situation. Hope you will read that, too. Thank you again 🤗

Love Talks

Chapter:1

Oct 05, 2022

I think you should add "parody" tag, too. And this is really interesting 😁

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:1

Oct 05, 2022

I don't know what happens but I'm sure my children will have a fujoshi mother lol
Actually I was planning to take a look your story since you did mine. When I saw this story at the home page, I was intrugued and I saw the author was you. That was a surprise for me 😆

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:0

Oct 05, 2022

To:Astral

Thank you for your comment 🤗 I will listen to you and give names to my characters :)

Love Talks

Chapter:3

Feb 09, 2022

That was pretty original 😆

My Waifu, Here Is My Love Poem

Chapter:5

Feb 09, 2022

Chasing the waifu with a bike 😆

My Waifu, Here Is My Love Poem

Chapter:3

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