Jun 22, 2023
I don't want to disturb the writer with my lack of talent-English but I love the describing the movements. I can't say I like football and I thought if I was going to read some sport movements, I would get bored. But your description is pretty good and I can understand it.
I wrote some action and fight scenes in details before. I'm sure I'm good at describing those actions but describing the sport activity is not my thing. Congrats about it!
But I have a problem about recognizing all characters in a team sport story. I believe it will stick in my memory as I read the chapters. 😀 I'm taking a break now, will continue tomorrow 👍
