Jul 28, 2021

Snazzy going full boxing hype-man up in here. I like it.

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Jul 28, 2021

Okay, screw it. Now I want a Snazzy plushie too.

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Jul 21, 2021

To:znf

Thanks for taking the time to read this far, and for leaving such well thought-out feedback. I really appreciate it!

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Jul 21, 2021

To:Ana Fowl

Thanks, Ana! I really appreciate you saying so!

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Jul 21, 2021

To:OscarHM

Oscar, I really appreciate you taking the time to read this far, and for taking the time to leave such a well-thought out reply. Out of my own curiosity, what lines personally took you out of the flow? I'd love to know so I can see if they can be improved.

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Jul 17, 2021

To:kazesenken

Upon re-read, I agree. I think it does come too quickly. I am considering doing a rewrite of the last bit of this chapter and moving that confrontation a few chapters later. I will probably do that at some point here soon.

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Jul 16, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thanks, V. You sure know how to make a man feel special.

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Jul 14, 2021

Kaz, this is hilarious. You have improved so much since we first met that it's crazy. Good job, dude!

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Jul 14, 2021

To:kazesenken

Never question the old man with a sword, never insult a loli with a gun, and never assume an unassuming chef is defenseless, amirite?

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Jul 14, 2021

To:Gurg

I can't wait for the next several chapters, honestly. They're gonna be so much fun to write. I appreciate you sticking with me thus far, my dude!

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Jul 14, 2021

To:Sevenlock

I appreciate that! I'm glad you're enjoying things! 😁

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Jul 14, 2021

To:meech

Hey thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I look forward to you joining us on this journey!

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Jul 12, 2021

To:JK

"HMMM I wonder what part of her is getting too big to squeeze beneath the floorboards? Whatever could it be?"

*bonk*

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Jul 12, 2021

To:Deleted User

Yeah, Ven is a nickname for Syrvena. I did my best to make that clear, but I am sorry if I didn't do a good enough job of that.

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Jul 12, 2021

To:Gurg

Thanks, man! I really appreciate it. I haven't gotten to write good ole fashioned horror segment in a while, so I'm having an absolute blast with it.

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