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Pearlyn.M

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Winner of MAL x Honeyfeed 2021 with my novel, Realm Assassin.

registered at: Jul 04, 2021

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Jun 02, 2023

Ngl this might be one of my favorites in this contest simply because the premise already caught my attention and I had to give it a shot- not disappointed!! Akari’s friends are people I want to be with 😂😂 very comedic and playful writing, can’t wait to see what happens next!!

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:Harmonica Writes

Let's see if I can make it beyond this chapter LMAO- But omg Facenovel is perfect, and I have the perfect scene to bring that up HAHA;;; Also TY for reading Harmonica much appreciated ily <3

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

Honestly your strongest suit is worldbuilding and it shows <3 Isekai is a little hard for me to get into, even in anime, but with yours, I love how you incorporate your world into the story without making it seem like an obvious exposition. Despite being the first chapter it's already very adventurous! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

Ay Otk good to see you back!! >w< I need a new Vutuber story to read since last year LMAO

Honestly a good start going straight to the point, honestly if my idol were to go to the same school as me I'd panic like him too haha also Val is the friend everyone needs-

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

Really enjoyed this playful/mystery vibe I'm getting from Kiyoko. I don't know why but this opening gives me "romantic mystery visual novel" vibes LMAO

Musubi

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

A unique way to start your story by bringing up a random fact xD Your strongest suit is definitely your characters, it feels very distinguished! Can't wait to see how this phobia gets tackled ^w^

Ailurophobia

Chapter:1

Jun 06, 2022

Hans pretty much captured most of what I had to say, other than that I personally find the descriptions a bit heavy so perhaps more spacing can work well for light readers ^^

I think something that can be worked on would be a more engaging hook; while the current one works I don’t get the sense of excitement or curiosity enough for me to stay and find who can and cannot be trusted. A slower approach isn’t bad, but like for ex. The last paragraph felt more like a description to what’s happening than an ominous aura, or a shock, or something that would make me go “hmmmm..”

Either way keep it up 👍

July 24th 2026

Chapter:0

Jun 06, 2022

Man to die at 25… if that were me I cannot be living with only 2 more years lmaooo

Third and Final Time

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

To:Supersession

I’m here to confess my love

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

To:Supersession

Ily

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

After reading two chapters of GEP, I have to say that I disagree with the majority of its fans when people say this has creative writing/best story in HF. First of all, the best story is and should be Amoria by user Sevenlock, with the best first chapter coming from the contest entry Faustic, also written by Sevenlock. Unfortunately, the writing of Gifted Education Project falls short with poorly written and forced jokes in the prologue, and then in chapter 1, we have a scene that seemingly insinuated an adult teacher falling for a minor. This shows what truly goes through inside Super's mind, aka he needs help.

I am so sorry. I didn't know you were going through so much Super. I thought I was being a good friend but I didn't know you had it rough. Because of this, I shall read the next chapter out of pity. I give you many pats.

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

To:TheGrompFather

In the library GrompPAPA uwu so yes I’ll be reading~

Third and Final Time

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Bruh

Why you hurt me like this

Faustic

Chapter:3

Jun 04, 2022

To:Burgerlava

Thank you for reading I appreciate it ^^

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

To:Hachikoko

Hello thank you for reading! If you’re planning this year just be sure to follow the prompts and use the keywords for inspiration!! 🥰🥰

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

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