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Huracán, Argentina, Writing, in that order. Aiming to write the first latin-american novel in Japan. If you smiled while reading my works, I won 😊 Find me on Instagram! @shuloxwrites
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Jun 22, 2023
To:Feristah
Thanks a lot for your feedback and also for your extended comment! You will never disturb me, in fact I loved reading people that likes my work. I try to maintain a descriptive narration, where it is sports or ambience or feelings, though I'm sometimes limited by the chapter word recommended limit. I'm glad you liked that. I understand you, so I'll make a list of the only relevant names: Takashi Ueda --> MC Jun Nakamura --> Best Friend 1 Hiroshi Nakata --> Best Friend 2 Coach Shiraito --> Coach (duh) Kenjiro Watanabe --> Captain and best player
The rest of names are just filling or less-relevant characters.
To:Katsuhito
Sergio Ramos? He was prime Pepe there, about to jump and kick his face 😆
I'm really enjoying your story, and I'm glad other writers enjoy mine too. Hoping to see more!
To:Kitsune
I call it hand-egg too 😆 never played but seems fun
Books, anime, novels and football, Haruki was being literally me, but then she said GIRLS HAHAHAHAHA father-san was about to destroy our poor guy 😭 AND THEN HE STOOD UP TO HIM, I WAS LITERALLY CELEBRATING. Amazing chapter!
Thanks a lot! I took advantage of the fact that as long as the narration is focused on the ML, it could be omniscient. I'm much better at writing in 3rd person, I feel it gives more freedom
Wow so many happened here! So our boy Toren will be Jun's rival, I was not expecting that AT ALL. Too bad they get segregated, how in the world would someone not appreciate a cat boy? 😡
Also poor Jun, he feels guilty now 😭 I feel it for him, hope he can somehow fix this situation
You are just pampering yourself by praising the foxes 😆
That's nice to hear. I personally think football has a ton of beautiful principles and values so beautiful that it's nice to grow up with it, despite some violent moments that happen everywhere. Still, you played football like ⚽ or like 🏈?
To:kazesenken
Inari just can't give encouragement without roasting 😆
I like the chemistry between the group of friends, they just get along together soooo well. And we have ourselves a second meeting now 👀
MAKE ME, my heart took a leap in that part 😆 come on Emma, show him what you got!
Loved Chihiro, she is a very lovely person. Despite their fears, they are putting a very charming story so far, hope to see more development!
To:Steward McOy
I know, right? But there's always time to catch up. Hope to see you around!
Wow, this surprise can be quite interesting. Also, I liked the school he attended more than the other three, that warm and familiar place is always nice!
Have been a little behind schedule, but always nice to go back to the best novel cover on earth 😆 Nice chapter, hoping to see more!
Noah Aubrey, that means... oh, man I love your narration. Hoping to see more!